Okay Mason can go. BYE! i'm sorry it's just you do not slap Jules and make her cry HE NEEDS TO GO my poor jules :( I do wish she opens up to Zayn and/or Liam in the future because maybe that's what she needs? But of course, I understand if Jules would like to keep her past a secret. c: Can I just say how cute Liam was when he said he was nervous for Jules meeting the guys? HE'S SUCH A SWEETIE PIE louis cooking is a good louis but i wouldn't want him to burn the meal lol. (((: i could totally picture niall playing that FIFA game hahaha HARRY NAKED OOOHH OKAY THAT'S NICE is everyone decent? hahahahah harry could be naked again c; I BET NIALL IS A GOOD HUGGER ahhhhh she bumped into harry styles ohhhh snap he's beautiful IF YOU WANTED TO TOUCH, ALL YOU NEEDED TO DO WAS ASK ^^you cheeky boy huh harry :o hahha yes harry is fit oh gosh the feels this story is giving me HAHAHAHAH SCORE ONE FOR JULES FOR THAT SCREAM JOKE HAHAHHAA i cannot wait for this ahh
Harry calling her Tiger is the cutest thing ever. He is too precious for words. I cant wait to see where you're going with this! And I'm so happy I got to hear the song in this chapter because it's beautiful! :)
So the GIF up top is like, killing me right now. Is he human? I swear, how can someone look like that?! It's just not normal…sigh. Oh and I was going through your story list, and you have really unique ideas. :D Anyway, hope you update this soon. I'm really looking forward to this!
Jules is probably one of my favorite characters ever! She's super feisty, and she makes me laugh! I just love her, and I can't get enough of her. Harry is super cheeky. Love that as well!! All of the boys are quite amazing! Your writing is superb in this, and I hope you post soon!!
OOOOOOOOH cheeky harry. jules is already awesome okay I love her. a++++++ character. I also agree with erin, I probs wouldn't have ever let go of harry's chest I mean c'mon, it's harry styles. great chapter and I'm excited for more to come!
OMG I WOULD HAVE DIED. And never taken my arms off his chest. Swooning. He is so cheeky and adorable and sexy I can't help it. It's good Jules is a firecracker but I feel so so sorry for her I just wanna give her hugs. I hope the boys can make her all better. So well written dear. Again, I am so happy to see you writing again!
I cannot wait to know more about Tyler and his back story. There's obviously a lot more to Jules and Tyler than we know! And Liam ah little wolfie hehe. He was especially was very sweet. Also Zayn, being his bad boy self hahaha. Anyways, I love love loved it! :)
Really excited to see where this goes and so far it's too good. The first chapter just really drew me in. Jules is really feisty, in my opinion and I hope that continues to show and develop through out the story.
This little bit caught my eye: “It’s Jules now, by the way.” I said, trying to remove the venom from my voice as I said it. No one called me Juliana. Not anymore. Is there a reason for that? Or am I just looking into that a little too much? Either way, I'm excited to find out.
What happened with Tyler? What happened with Jules? What secrets is she harboring? So many questions! Oh my gosh, too excited to find out.
Anywho, this chapter was just amazing and I'm just looking forward for more. Not only is the content perfection, but your grammar is on point and the flow of your sentences are very easy to piece together.
HOW DID I NOT KNOW YOU WERE WORKING ON A HARRY STORY WHEN YOU KNOW I ADORE HIM SO MUCH???? This seems like it's gonna be sad. I hope she gets happiness. Poor Jules :( How could you ever say no to Liam? Like f'real.
OH GOD FAMILY LIAM KILLS ME. but basically already loves Jules bc she's a badass and can play and sing and she's basically the greatest character ever okay so sassy. BUT JULES BBY WHY DONT YOU SING and of course she finds Zayn attractive, bc he totally is. AGAIN CAN WE TAKE A MOMENT TO APPRECIATE FAMILY LIAM PAYNE who is Tyler because his death is hurting Jules and I don't want my bby to be upset. fuck yes Haz and Niall will get her to sing.
wonderful start, meghan! I'm very excited for the rest of the story!