Erm....you could write some chapters as fillers for when you have things to do;the fillers could be of them talking about the weddng then they could bbe trying to do the weddingbut josh's mhm tries to seperatecthe two? Also i'm typing on my phone, sorry for typos. I love this fic as well
Ahhh absolutely love it! Every chapter you write is pure perfection. Improvements would be the same as the last comment, just add more detail once someone has said something but apart from that keep up your amazing work :)
I fangirled too much with the new chapter. It so cuuuuttteeee. And the rings are cheesy and cute and just asdfghjkl. Also not saying your writing is awful and that you shouldn't write anymore, cause they'd be big fat lies, but for an improvement with your writing you could add some more detail, so after someone's said something, you could put some detail about like them nervously biting their lip if they're nervous, or if they're sad, detail bout them looking down and just little things like that maybe to improve. Sorry for the long comment as well, but I love this fic, it's cute and really good.