Broken Things - Comments

i'm crying as Sawyer's dad tells her the truth. you have made me cry. i love this.

dude, as the chapters continue i find myself becoming more and more emotional. this is perfected writing. i love that they both are waiting for the other person to say its okay... now they just have to take the leap.

dude, as the chapters continue i find myself becoming more and more emotional. this is perfected writing. i love that they both are waiting for the other person to say its okay... now they just have to take the leap.

I'm so happy Harry came to stay with her awww :D

Shoutout to you for capturing exactly how I feel about Chicago. I was downtown today by Water Tower and it just always amazes me at how gorgeous the city is.

I literally cannot with theses two

This is great, update soon?

Can you give us something positive soon? We're 20 chapters in and I need something to keep me going pleaseeeeee! Love this story :)

Aww, I'm sad about Harry and Sawyer. I love that they kissed, but I'm sad about the terms in which it happened, and how upset Harry seems about the whole thing. He's smart, though, keeping his distance from Sawyer and making her stop because she was drunk-- because that privately would've only cause more drama than it already had. I hate that she's staying with her dad, though, especially when it makes her so miserable. But, hopefully... Maybe... Please can Harry come and save her in Chicago?! (:

I can't wait for the next chapter. I really adore your writing, and I'm total shit for not reviewing every chapter, because your stories are some of my favorites. But, I promise I'm gonna get better at it because this story is so lovely and deserves so much more attention.

xxx

Hey this is amazinggg storyy..In love with the characters..and i am soo addicted to reading it..plz plz keep updating soon..dont mind but if u take big gaps a reader tends to forget the story or lose intrest..so plz update atleast once in a week..i just cant wait to knw what happns next..

Aww, Harry's got feelings for Sawyer still. And Sawyer is kinda in denial about it (?). But she needs to talk to him, as much as they both don't want to have the conversation. They've obviously got some serious tension going on, and there's clearly still something between them. I hope they can talk about it, though. Great chapter! xx

@ round.in.circles
Hi! Hello!

That's really amazing that I could help you sort of piece it all together, I guess. To actually be helpful through my writing, that's the dream, so it really is awesome to hear you think I did an okay job! So sorry to hear about that happening to you, though. I can only imagine how painful that must be, but I'm sure you're stronger for it now! And no worries, definitely no ranting going on. Happy to hear you're enjoying the story so far! Thanks for stopping by!

I have just happened upon this wonderful story and I'm so glad I did. I just want to let you know that this story is so so so similar to a situation I found myself in last year. Obviously my ex didn't leave me to be in One Direction but the similarities are so crazy! Kind of opening my eyes to what happened to us in a way and I just want to say thank you for that. I know this is super weird but as I'm reading im just thinking wow, it's weird to see how she reacts to what I just went through because I know exactly how it feels to be left and then completely ignored by someone you thought cared about you so much.

Sorry about this rant but I just couldn't not voice my opinion lol this story is so wonderful! And I can't wait to finish it!

oh my gosh... perfect!!! just get together, already!!!

ughh... that was the CUTEST thing EVER!! <3

@ LongLiveMontrose
That is one of the highest compliments anyone can pay me or my writing, so thank you so much. I'm very happy to hear you're enjoying it so far! Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment on this. It means a lot to me and I really appreciate it!

i'm not even a fan of one direction and i am addicted to this story. your writing is fantastic. i really hope that you update soon! i think that sawyer is starting to really forgive harry and i just want to see them make up and try again. <3

This is amazing and I've just read the entirety of it, and I love it so much! Your writing is amazing. (:

I suck at giving comments, but I just wanted you to know that I read this and holy cow I missed your writing so much!

AGH!