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  • hottestchocolate

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    @ Jkim9197
    I'm not super duper motivated to write a lot more for this story but I'll probably write an epilogue to it in a style maybe similar to this epilogue? Or if I have a burst of inspiration I could write more chapters. But yeah, as I said, I'm pretty much done with this story. Hope you enjoyed it so far and who knows, maybe there will be more!
    September 14th, 2014 at 11:52pm
  • Jkim9197

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    What this is the end this can't be the end I was hoping soo much more would happen I wanted to watch their relationship grow I wanted to find out how it worked out or if things would try to tear them apart I wanted to know how they would deal with problems that would arise I wanted to know soo much about this relationship that I'll never know now
    September 14th, 2014 at 06:46am
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    @ Jkim9197
    Thank you :)
    August 17th, 2014 at 03:55pm
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    Omg sooo cute
    August 17th, 2014 at 03:49pm
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    @ Jkim9197
    Haha I get you, I only started shipping them recently but I somehow only write John/Alex (Callakarth) anymore! I'm glad you like it c:
    July 21st, 2014 at 08:43am
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    Okay soo I've never shipped John and Alex before I've always hipped Jalex but idk this has me starting to ship John an Alex xD idk they are kinda cute together I guess idk I'm confused by my feelings
    July 21st, 2014 at 06:37am
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    @ darkeyeddreamerr
    Your feeling might be right, sadly...
    June 22nd, 2014 at 12:05pm
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    Aw they're getting along now yay! I have a feeling it might not stay that way?...
    June 22nd, 2014 at 10:01am
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    @ darkeyeddreamerr
    Thank you! I tried to get that across, yeah :)
    June 16th, 2014 at 08:11am
  • darkeyeddreamerr

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    It was great to get more of a feel for their personalities in this chapter :)
    June 16th, 2014 at 06:53am
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    @ Forever Young.
    Okay first off, you're one of my favourite writers on here so I'm really happy and honoured you choose to read this!

    Of course, con-crit is always appreciated! I'll try to get in more details and personality, I know it's something I need to work on. Thanks so much! :)
    June 12th, 2014 at 08:50am
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    I love this pairing so when i saw this fic I had to read it! I love the concept of it and I like where it's going a lot!

    I hope you don't mind a little bit of constructive crit - for future chapters, maybe try and give more detail? So far it seems really rushed and I really haven't been able to get an idea of what their personalities are like aside from the fact that John is apparently pretentious. Maybe some more dialogue would help!
    June 12th, 2014 at 07:23am
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    @ alexwilliamsasskarth
    Yes oh my god I agree with you I've read almost all Callakarth that exists and so I decided to help a tiny bit with the lack of Callakarth!! c: Thank you!
    June 11th, 2014 at 11:40pm
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    oh golly gosh i love this pairing so much i'm super excited to read this ty sm for writing it bc there's a serious lack of callakarth
    June 11th, 2014 at 11:39pm
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    oh golly gosh i love this pairing so much i'm super excited to read this ty sm for writing it bc there's a serious lack of callakarth
    June 11th, 2014 at 11:39pm
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    @ Just_Let_Love_Be_
    I'll try to work out why they hate each other a bit more! Thanks for the feedback :)

    Alex has a problem with John because he can just never leave him alone and at least for me, someone correcting me all the time would drive me crazy.
    John hates Alex because Alex wasn't the nicest to him either when responding to his corrections, it'll become more apparent in a later chapter!

    and besides these explanations, there may or may not be something underneath ;)

    Sorry this is so vague at the moment :')
    June 11th, 2014 at 11:32pm
  • Not-Anymore

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    I get the feeling the two of them are being a bit overdramatic in regards to each other. Maybe it's just because we don't have much of a backstory, but while John's corrections may be concited and rude, I don't feel like they necesarily create hate. And why does John hate Alex again?

    But anyway, I am so excited for a student/teacher Callakarth and I can't wait to see where this goes!
    June 11th, 2014 at 11:29pm
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    @ darkeyeddreamerr
    me too! thank you :)
    June 10th, 2014 at 12:32pm
  • darkeyeddreamerr

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    Student/teacher fics are wonderful and callakarth is one of my favorite pairings so I'm really excited for this!
    June 10th, 2014 at 06:45am