Wait until the third chapter to bring Matt in!! Also, I think that Mallory (in the last story) was right in being hurt- but come on Mal, what are you doing wrecking cars? She keeps making herself look ridiculous and also sends mixed messages about wanting to be with Matt and never wanting to see him again. Honestly, if I were Matt, I would try to make it up to her so things could end on an okay note and then get out of that relationship like a bat outta hell.
Hmm this should certainly be interesting and great! I personally don't want her to date anyone else and I kind of get the feeling she doesn't want to either. Although, if she does start dating Brent I think it'd be because she's lonely or that she wants to forget about Matt. Also, I definitely feel like Mallory because I'm actually irritated with Matt too. I wouldn't give in easily, if at all. But for this story's sake I feel like if they don't end up together it would be a bit strange. Anyway! I'm looking forward to more!
Wow. A groveling Matt? I don't find that image very appealing. Lol. I'm sure he's going to end up being jealous of Brent. I know things between them are not over, because there wouldn't be a sequel if they were, but I still want him to have to watch her move on and be happy with someone else, at least temporarily.
At first, I thought office 1 was her previous office and I was gonna be like how does it get any better than Harvey's office? Lol. I'm excited for this. She's growing up. And also I want Matt to be terribly jealous of Brent! :D
I love this story. I was getting annoyed at matt for being so nonchalant and not beig apologetic in good girl but now that you have started writing it as him begging for forgiveness Im really intrigued. I hope you expand on matts stalkerish behaviour.
Aw yeah! The sequel has begun! Glad to know Matt feels bad about what he's done, but stalking her won't help... Or will it? Haha. And would this Brent happen to be Brian's brother Brent? Lol
I want Matt to show up and make an ass of himself!!! Haha loved this first chapter! Isn't it a bit weird that they agreed to ignore each other but as soon as Tess is gone Matt is on her and bugging her. Hmm makes me wonder if he was still messing with the slut?!!