Misconceptions - Comments

I love drabbles because they express something so great in such a short amount of words. Here you did it. Somehow I feel like I connect to the main character, like her and I are nearly the same person. As I read I felt like the story the narrator told was my own. The story could connect to anyone and I love it. Fantastic!

I remember reading this before and now I'm wondering why I never commented. It seems so familiar.

Anyway, very short but beautiful piece. It's amazing how you were able to describe things in large paragraphs. Sometimes I see people kind of struggle with it but you have done it masterfully. I pictured this really beautiful person in my head and I think my heart shattered when you wrote what strangers tell her and that she's broken. It's sad because so many people do go through this. It's such a relatable story which makes it so much better! This is definitely one of the best drabbles I've ever read. Your writing is beautiful and the drabbles flows wonderfully.

Great job! :D

This is so beautifully written that it should be framed. Literally. In a museum! I don't think the word beautiful even fits how utterly exquisite this work of art is. To be able to appreciate the elegance of this piece is something I don't know if even I can do and I'm pretty good at critiquing, (not that I'm bragging :D) I also feel like it was short, sweet, and to the point, while dragging it out in all the right places at the same time, which I imagine is what you were going for. If not, you succeeded in doing something that many authors try to do but fail (like me ;P) at miserably and that is a talent worth recognizing. Keep writing, you can become a great and amazing author one day. I will be first in line to buy your book.

Short and sweet! I love how you were able to paint such a picture with so few words! You really inspired feeling for the character in this! Your writing is amazing! Truly! Xx

This, was simply beautiful.

I loved your descriptions, and the sentiment and feelings were felt behind every word. It's short, but beautifully sweet.

Your writing is fantastic, again you have a lovely flow with words and your descriptions are amazing. I can feel the love behind the words, and a sense of longing.

Great drabble, and I'll give it a recommendation.