@ Tipsy Returns Oh it didn't offend me at all haha. I was just letting you know what it really was is all. And yep. I'm about to put it up now so just you wait!
@ cmflynn827 Hey, I didn't mean to offend you in any way. Sorry if you felt bad. I just was being honest, I'm really very sorry. And yeah, you should probably post it. I'll read
@ Tipsy Returns The ending was planned to be how it should have, despite it's horribleness. This was a spin-off of the fairytale, and it might just be me, but I rather enjoy them when they are twisted in a dark manner. Sorry to hear that you didn't like the ending, but it's only a one-shot type of thing, so no more to come. However, I do want to make more for the majority of the princesses. I have a Little Mermaid one you would definitely enjoy if you want a happy ending that I'm going to post today
Hi there. *Comment Swap* As promised, I'm here. Let me start off with the description, which is wonderful in the story. Everything was going perfectly, I was enjoying the spin off and the twist, until the end. Seriously, the ending spoiled it for me. I mean, if it was some ordinary tale, I wouldn't have minded Belle dying all that much. But a fairytale. Its about happy endings and happily ever afters right? So Belle dying didn't really please me. I was actually expecting the beast to come up and save her you know. I mean, come on, Belle is my favorite princess character, and hence the disappointment in the end. I'd still say you add another chapter and make Belle survive, and make the best and her end up together, with your own made up logic. That'd be great. If you do that let me know. :) I hope I didn't offed you dear. This was written brilliantly, so keep up with the nice work.
June 18th, 2014 at 12:35pm
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