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  • broknheartparade

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    this was really cute! <3
    January 31st, 2015 at 04:14am
  • not_today

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    I'm dead. you just killed me with this last chapter. you're the reason for my death.
    September 5th, 2014 at 10:42pm
  • balladofben

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    Daddy Ashton AU would be cool. Really love your style of writing. Good job! :-)
    August 10th, 2014 at 07:30am
  • hearts;

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    I LOVE KARA SO MUCH OH MY GOD
    luke is all freaking out and apologizing and she just sasses him
    buuuuut, i'm super happy the boys and Liz finally met her and then luke and kara gave me serious cutesy couple feels throughout the whole thing jesus
    Basically this chapter had a lot going on and you are still amazing. *kisses*
    August 9th, 2014 at 11:54pm
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    IT HAPPENED OH GOD THIS IS A GLORIOUS MOMENT
    luke was so nervous but then he just did it and YESSSSSSSS
    i spent the entire chapter squealing and wiggling in excitement
    (also aww you are such a sweetheart ilysm)
    July 30th, 2014 at 11:15pm
  • not_today

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    Sweet Jesus I fucking love you and I'm so glad she likes him back I'm so haPPY :'))))
    July 30th, 2014 at 07:19pm
  • Nuff_Said

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    LOL Holy shizzzz! Ryker is BLIND! Great twist xD

    The selfies were an excellent touch as well! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
    July 28th, 2014 at 05:50am
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    yesssss she's not dating ryker go for it luke
    the selfies killed me bc yeah we all know he's a lil cherub
    also now i really want some iced coffee
    July 22nd, 2014 at 06:18pm
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    yesssss she's not dating ryker go for it luke
    the selfies killed me bc yeah we all know he's a lil cherub
    also now i really want some iced coffee
    July 22nd, 2014 at 06:18pm
  • omjitsellie

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    I want them to fall madly in love
    July 16th, 2014 at 07:18pm
  • not_today

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    I'm so glad they ran into each other before they were supposed to meet idk man
    July 15th, 2014 at 09:02pm
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    oh snap luke trying to low-key warn kara he doesn't like her smoking
    also, 18 is such a freaking good song and i want to hug you for slipping in the reference to it
    July 15th, 2014 at 05:49pm
  • swell

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    Despite me being a fan of 5SOS, I don't read much of their fics but I have to say that reading yours makes me want to go out and find 5sos fics. I found this a few days ago and it's already one of my favourite fics. I feel like you've got the mindset of Luke down really well and I love reading his thoughts regarding Kara or whether he looks weird or awkward. Kara seems like a really cool chick and perfect for Luke and I ship them so hardcore it's not even funny. I love how easy this flows and how relatable this is which is what makes it such an easy and fun read to get hooked into. The fact that this is going to be only ten chapters breaks my heart a lil but I'm excited too since I really wanna see how the two finally meet (if they do, I hope so!). So much love for this.
    July 10th, 2014 at 09:32am
  • Nuff_Said

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    This is such an adorable story! I LOVE IT. I haven't read such a good fan fiction in a while! Please update soon :3 <3
    July 9th, 2014 at 11:49pm
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    OH MYGOD IPOD GET YOUR SHIT TOGETHER
    So sorry for the outburst, I've had to retype this comment about five times already and only because my iPod is acting wonky sigh
    A N Y H O W
    thank you very much for another flawless update milady, you never dissapoint. of course, that means i'M TRYING NOT TO RIP MY HAIR OUT ON ACCOUNT OF THIS BEING SO CUTE AND GIVING ME MASSIVE FEELS
    clingy, jealous luke is making my tummy go all funny. killing me here hemmo.
    and hey kara not very nice of you to not introduce ryker properly and clear things up a bit
    And this has probably been my longest comment so far but CURSE IT ALL BLAME THE FEELS
    July 9th, 2014 at 07:10am
  • not_today

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    Sweet baby jesus I'm so glad I found this story good lord god bless you for writing this! Can't wait for the next update, hun!
    July 9th, 2014 at 02:20am
  • Kol.

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    Let me love Luke Hemmings forever like right now. He is perfection and totally adorable with his crush on Kara. Like they just need to meet so he really can sweep her off her feet like we all know he would.
    July 8th, 2014 at 06:27pm
  • omjitsellie

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    I want them to get together already. Too much cuteness!
    July 8th, 2014 at 05:48pm
  • louis tomlinson.

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    the concept of this is so cool and adorable, I love it!

    (also my name is Kara and picturing Luke Hemmings being in love w me is a nice thing heheheheheh)
    July 7th, 2014 at 11:33pm
  • mrsbellaray

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    cute cute cute! luke is just too adorable! they need to meet! xx
    July 7th, 2014 at 05:13am