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  • carpediem182

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    Holy hell, i've been reading it for grammer mistakes, and i just realised that i made her completely psychotic!!!
    July 12th, 2014 at 11:43pm
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    Holy hell, i've been reading it for grammer mistakes, and i just realised that i made her completely psychotic!!!
    July 12th, 2014 at 11:43pm
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    Thanks for all the comments Mr. Green Mr. Green Mr. Green
    Gonna update in a few... minutes Very Happy Cool
    July 12th, 2014 at 11:21pm
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    Wow what the with the dad just wow nice I like it
    July 11th, 2014 at 06:19pm
  • Crystal2

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    Yikes, she is cray cray!
    July 11th, 2014 at 04:43pm
  • WhereMyDemonsHide

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    Is she ultraviolent? Is she disturbed? He'd better tell her that he loves her. XD poor Billie, I wonder what he'll do next Mr. Green
    July 9th, 2014 at 10:15pm
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    @WhereMyDemonsHide
    Lol :D Thanks, that means a lot
    Tbh, i kinda liked the 'Psyho Killer' idea Very Happy Very Happy Smile Smile
    July 9th, 2014 at 06:59pm
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    Epic! Hey what if Laura is a psycho killer? Haha I don't know, sorry I'm listening to really dark music right now, I love this story though Mr. Green
    June 25th, 2014 at 03:34am
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    Hm... maybe show more about Laura and Billie's relationship, like her loving and caring side towards him, why Billie puts up with her (insert word here).
    June 21st, 2014 at 09:27pm
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    @ Crystal2
    Same :D Thanks for reading. It Means a lot to me :D
    June 21st, 2014 at 08:32pm
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    Damn. If I was with Billie I'd be hugging him to death, not beating his brains out :( Keep writing!
    June 19th, 2014 at 05:39pm
  • whatername12

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    I like this keep writing ;)
    June 18th, 2014 at 10:59pm
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    I like this keep writing ;)
    June 18th, 2014 at 10:59pm
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