Afire Love - Comments

  • Anchor and Hope.

    Anchor and Hope. (200)

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    So...I saw this and I felt about a million things right away.

    Thought #1: Ed Sheeran title- I can dig it, but this song breaks my heart so...be cautious (and probably grab some tissues)...
    Thought #2: This is such a sweet start (insert a sigh of content) because good Michael writing.

    And there we go- my heart just shattered. (The tissues were clearly a wise idea.)

    I just...this was so we written. The details just set it off, it made it so real. It was just so perfect. It evoked a real, raw emotion, and that (for me, personally) is the most wonderful thing a writer can do.

    I'm serious when I say my heart actually aches right now. This was just perfect...I wish I could articulate a little better but I'm just...still in a bit of shock so...yeah. Bravo! Clap Cry
    July 16th, 2014 at 09:38pm
  • BecauseSheSaidSo

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    Well fuck.
    That was an emotional roller coaster.
    The way you write is so raw and real. Beautiful one-shot. Looking forward to reading more of your writing. xx
    June 20th, 2014 at 04:42am
  • BecauseSheSaidSo

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    Well fuck.
    That was an emotional roller coaster.
    The way you write is so raw and real. Beautiful one-shot. Absolutely amazing. Looking forward to more of your writing. xx
    June 20th, 2014 at 04:41am