Heaven and Hell - Comments

Why does it feel like the cabin is something you got from tvd? Because it most likely is. I like where the chapters going and I like that Alaric and Jayce are being the friends that they need to be. It'll be interesting to see where this leads to.

I love the chapter; I love the story and you know this because I constantly tell you when we're on skype together. fricky frack it's perfect these two are perfect.

Ugh, I loved this chapter. The protectiveness coming from the brothers, and a little love interest with Ben's uncle going on. And then you have Ben and Lucifer; our main characters. I really shouldn't swear but fuuuuuuuck I just love this chapter. I like how it's still got the mystery but it's also really freaking cute between them. wow I love this chapter.

@ bara-kitten
Aw this comment was so sweet!!! Thank you dear! ^-^

I'm really loving this already, and its such an interesting pairing. I never would've thought of them if it wasn't for this story, but it's so interesting I've come to love it already.
This was an interesting update too. (Quiz: how many times can I say interesting in one comment?)
Your writing style is unique and I really like it, I enjoy reading this a lot, I can't wait for the next update. c:

Omg this is such a tense storyline ugh

It's starting to hit me how much Alaric and Jayce are like the Salvatores. Actually it's a little weird but to each his own with their stories. The beginning was a little morbid but it sets a mood with what's to come. And wow Luce. Not surprised that he did that. All in all it's good. It's got a storyline in each chapter.

@ mabbitch
-Is glaring;-
-But loves you;-
-Can't handle it;-
-Dies;-

well that was a morbid beginning to the chapter wow. it's funny how Alaric and Jayce remind of Damon and Stefan. actually it's accurate how you're portraying them. and then you have Ben who is clearly Elena [again; not sorry for saying that.] all in all a good chapter as always.

@ mjtheneon
That just made me laugh. Wow.

This is creepy and weird and i don't know why but i liKE It

Luci stop being a dick to Benny. I'm enjoying this couple and the plot you gave for it. It's different from what and how you normally write. It's not too fast, but it's also not too slow when it comes to getting to the point. It's just the right pace and it's nice to see that nowadays. SHORT COMMENT BUT YOLO I LIKE IT CONTINUE WRITING BBY

Love it. Absolutely love it. I like how you're not rushing it into it like so many people do. Like Twilight actually... But I love what you have so far. It's interesting; seeing how Ben doesn't believe in the supernatural and then you have Lucifer like "I'm Satan, I'm part of the supernatural world duh". But it's nice to see you not rushing it with Ben. I like that about how you're portraying him in this story. Keep it up, can't wait for more.

Ben reminds me of Elena with the diary entry. Like too much of a Elena that it's actually scary but that was a good start on your story. Kept me interested in it even after I read that opening.
Lucifer's pushy, but that's actually how he is in the show and that's actually nice to see. His actual self acting how he normally would. Because it's Lucifer. And then there's Ben.
So far, I like the first chapter. I really do enjoy it and I hope you continue writing this because 1) I like the pairing and 2) I like your writing style. It's not jumbled up but it's clean and gets to the point without anything being repeated too much or at all. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter.

All in all I like it. It's something different and new; something you don't see every day. It's an interesting couple you're doing and I like that. Again, not something you see every day. and this comment is short and omg it shouldn't be but wow. I'm lame. I look forward to your next chapter and the next chapter and the next chapter. And so on and so forth.

All in all I like it. It's something different and new; something you don't see every day. It's an interesting couple you're doing and I like that. Again, not something you see every day. and this comment is short and omg it shouldn't be but wow. I'm lame. I look forward to your next chapter and the next chapter and the next chapter. And so on and so forth.