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October 27th, 2015 at 04:49am
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Oh this is getting juicy! Can't wait for the next update!!!October 24th, 2015 at 09:36pm
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ok chill thanksOctober 23rd, 2015 at 05:34am
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Okat just finished chapter 16 and I can't wait for more! I can't wait for shit to hit the fan and dramamamama!!!October 19th, 2015 at 07:30pm
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Wow, you're an amazing writer. I love how you sprinkle random little humor or band named, etc in there. The story is really realistic and believable which is actually pretty uncommon for fan fictions. I'm only on chapter 3 but I can't wait to read more. BTW the part where they are making gun of Ashton and Michael and the daddy kink made me laugh so hard haha I loved it. I love that each one of the boys personalities shine through. Luke's awkwardness, Calum laughing and losing his shit, Michael and his sarcasm and jokes, and Ashton and his happy go lucky personality. Love love love it. I'm a writer as well but I haven't published any of my stuff yet, I'm too critical so I appreciate a good story when I read one. Wow sorry this was totally fangirling haha fuck. Anyway love the story! :)October 18th, 2015 at 03:40pm
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I don't usually read a lot of 5SOS fanfics but I quite like this one. I like the relationships between the characters and I like the idea behind the story. I feel like something else needs to happen though. There's lots of small dramas and storylines, but I want something exciting to happen regarding the whole Ashton/Luke issue. I'm intrigued to know what the issue is there. I also wish you'd update more, because overall I do really like this. It's well written generally and it's detailed but not boringly detailed. It is really exciting to read and I'm looking forward to the next chapter xOctober 15th, 2015 at 08:48pm
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I don't usually read a lot of 5SOS fanfics but I quite like this one. I like the relationships between the characters and I like the idea behind the story. I feel like something else needs to happen though. There's lots of small dramas and storylines, but I want something exciting to happen regarding the whole Ashton/Luke issue. I'm intrigued to know what the issue is there. I also wish you'd update more, because overall I do really like this. It's well written generally and it's detailed but not boringly detailed. It is really exciting to read and I'm looking forward to the next chapter xOctober 15th, 2015 at 08:47pm
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I LOVE THIS BUT IM STILL WAITING FOR THEM TO BANG MANJune 13th, 2015 at 06:49pm
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YES JENNIFER ILYJune 11th, 2015 at 04:23pm
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oh my god of course Michael would...May 1st, 2015 at 04:19am
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JENNIFER PLSMay 1st, 2015 at 04:14am
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Holy shit.....about to reread all the previous chapters!!! But I loved this chapter. Got to see a glimpse of a very Dominant Luke which is hot AF. Can't wait for the next chapter so they can bail out Mikey. LolMay 1st, 2015 at 03:19am
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The calm before the storm? THE CALM BEFORE THE STORM!! Why are you doing this to me!!! They're finally together and we kinda get a glimpse into what the heck is wrong with Ash and Luke and then you throw this at us!! I'm so sad but also so excited to read what's to come!March 30th, 2015 at 07:50pm
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AGHHHHHHHMarch 12th, 2015 at 10:15pm
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THIS CHAPTER IS CUTE AFMarch 11th, 2015 at 06:16am
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Uggggggh the fucking calm before the storm? Really!?March 11th, 2015 at 03:39am
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I LIVE FOR LUKE AND TAYLA MOMENTS!!!!! Luke is just so ugggghhhh! I just want to know why Ash is being a little butt though! But more importantly, Luke and Tayla are sharing a room, holy shit! Can't wait for the next update!!!!February 25th, 2015 at 07:17am
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@ Dreamlesslullabys
Lmao whatFebruary 25th, 2015 at 03:21am -
Ugh yes jennifer fuck it upFebruary 25th, 2015 at 03:17am
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Ughhh YAAAASSSS. I mean, I would've taken the bet and just brought Luke back to my room lol
February 24th, 2015 at 09:48pm
