No One's Here to Sleep. - Comments

Alex is a freaking badass and I love it! I love how your not rushing her and Derek's relationship a lot of people tend to loose track of Derek's personality while building their own characters personality but so far so good! Just don't make him go all soft on us haha. Looking forward to more though!

AMAZING!

I like this. And Derek. And the banner and everything. I hope you update soon!

hahahahah she thinks chris looks like santa and I kind thought that he looked like a homeless man the mix of what she is- wicked!

wow three things in one, that is alot of one person and i hope Alex and Derek get closer

i say she is a vampire/wolf hybrid

Hm, I am unsure of my feelings and this story. I've subscribed though because I'm quite curious to see where you take it.

A vampire hybrid maybe? Ugh! What the hell is she? On a side note I dig the amount of detail added to this chapter and the small insight to her past with Derek. It was a great new chapter (:

im confused but i love it!

im confused but i love it!

Teen wolf is my absolute fav! I can see you are going with the new season which is cool. I haven't watched last nights episode yet so hopefully I won't get a spoiler.

While the first and second chapters were short and to the point they were good. Seeing as she is a hunter, born and raised, I would expect her to get straight to the point. the fact that this is in first person, it makes sense. I like the sense of soldier i get from her.

Gah! She's not human! The car threw me off for sure. I wasn't expecting something flashy since the Argents aren't really flashy. I love love love that you kept Deacons character the same. I love when the characters aren't altered.

Again, her character gives me the soldier vibe which I am loving. I'm dying to know what her secret is. I'm sure she isn't a werewolf seeing as she doesn't seem to particularly like them. I just want to know how everyone can tell there is something different.

So the fifth chapter opens up many questions for me. Alex seems very stand offish towards the others which would make getting to know them a little difficult in my opinion. I do have to say that I don't think Stiles is scared of Derek so I don't think he'd say she's scarier than Derek, especially if all she was doing was observing. Maybe meaner but not scarier. That's just my opinion though. You're doing great with this so far and I hope you continue (:

i like the story so far, cant wait to read more

Keephe updates coming!