Blood Relatives - Comments

  • ruthann

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    So tense!! I'm pretty obsessed with CI and ID & there's a programme called Blood Relatives so I wondered if that's what inspired this? Anyway, your writing is so refreshing and I love this Mr. Green
    February 12th, 2015 at 12:28pm
  • wish on a firefly

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    This is such an amazing story! Urpf, the emotions are killing me right now. Poor Jenna. Knowing her best friend was killed at the hands of her parents. That’s really fucked up. I’m wondering how everything will play out?

    I really love how you write the characters. They are all so realistic and just emotional. I sure hope Jenna will be ok though because I doubt anyone would be able to come back after hearing news like that, especially when the news hit so close to home. I especially loved the part where Jenna’s older sister was talking to her about death; especially Anna’s and helping her understand what happened to her best friend. You definitely captured the truth about kids being stronger than they seem and more intuitive too. Not many people realize that kids always know or can sense when something is wrong.

    You did a really great job with this. Thanks for the wonderful read. I’m going to subscribe. Thanks again.

    -Hina
    January 27th, 2015 at 06:59pm
  • AngelicWasteland;

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    This is really good, the emotion that it holds is captivating and raw
    January 27th, 2015 at 06:00pm
  • withupsofloating

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    Ooh! I'm already hooked.
    June 28th, 2014 at 06:01am