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  • Barbielovesyou

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    That was amazing. I loved the description of your words, and you made everything connect with the two. Awesome job! :3
    April 28th, 2015 at 12:29am
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    That was amazing. I loved the description of your words, and you made everything connect with the two. Awesome job! :3
    April 28th, 2015 at 12:29am
  • Lyra

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    Aaawww, this was just...aaawww.

    The comfortableness between the two of them makes this such a lovely read. They're a couple who knew each other inside and out, and you manage to get that across in a one shot perfectly. In one conversation, you give us an insight into their relationship (referring to the convo about their dates) and it's amazing how you do that. Everything about this story just made me smile. The obvious connection, the happiness in their commitment and just how they love each other, is such a joy to read. You make the two men opposites in some ways, Gerard is more in control when he needs to be, but at the end of it, they're so similar that it's just heart warming. Frank's frustration gave this story so much humour, and I'm surprised he managed to wait until after the reception! Overall, this was just wonderful!
    July 12th, 2014 at 10:11pm
  • collidewithmyb0ner

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    THIS WAS SO CUTE IM SCREAMING THANKS FOR WRITING THIS I LOVE YOU
    July 1st, 2014 at 03:08am
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