Against Parental Consent - Comments

I'm pretty sure i only had one update for this one. I'm sure you'll let me know for sure what i have. Lol

This was good. It's been so long I had to take a few seconds and remember what was going on. But this was good. I'm happy it wasn't very long. Makes it easier to get back into.

They definitely need to figure out what they're gonna do. They can't keep going on this way. Too hard for everyone involved. It's ugly enough as it is. Good chapter though, to kind of get back on track and caught up.

It was good. Its been so long since you updated this one that I forgot what was going on for a second. yes I know I should hardly talk. Lol

I really hope Tyler keeps his promise to tell Kate. He needs to let her go so she can have closure and move on, hopefully... hopefully she doesnt freak out and try to kill someone. That would be bad.

More soon!

Short was good. I don't mind short sometimes. Lol.

This was good. I'm so worried about what's gonna happen, Omg. What is she gonna do when she finds out? She's gonna flip, dude

Good chapter babe

I felt bad for the mom in this one. It made me sad because we can see shes in denial, but she knows shes in denial at the same time. I liked the part where Angelina was talking about how she knows her mother is human and flawed too.

More soon! Its been too long for this one.

I love this story. It's different to what I usually read, but it's a nice read. Interesting. I can't wait until your next update! :)

Cute chapter. It wasa little short, but that's OK with me. It was right to the point. I need longer sex chapters though. :P

Sorry, again for taking so long. I love you

Aw, it was short. I was just getting into it and it stopped. Thats okay though, I'm sleepy. Haha

I really like Lee, and I like her relationship with Tyler. Its sweet. Her conversation with Angelina gave Tylers character some more depth too, which was good.

More soon!

Good chapter. Sorry in such a pathetic twit and it took me so long to read it.

I love Lee. Maybe being around her will help Angelina get the self confidence she needs to get away from her mother. She should have called the cops when she was locked up.

Great chapter

So, I think Tyler just needs to kidnap Angelina, she can live with him, and then he can break up with Kate. Problem solved! Lol. Yeah, I know, not practical or nearly as dramatic as the alternative.

But now she has a job and she can save to get her own place. Boom.

Good chapter, more soon!

The end made me think of cinderella. Lol the wicked stepmother locking her in her room. Bahaha. Lol. Even though obviously is a little different than that.

And I agree with your story comment, it does need to kind of go back to give Katy a human side, but I get what you're trying to do. It's just an impossible situation.

So the end was a bit crazy, but I can see why you did it that way.

And they finally had sex. Not surprising, thats been coming for a while.

Overall this was a good chapter. I'd like to see what Tyler is going to do to get her out of her room.

I'm not totally sure what Tyler wants with Katy. I think it's time they broke up and admitted how he really feels. If he doesn't want her and wants her daughter, I mean come on. That's never gonna work out.

Great chapter. More soon?

Explosive is definitely the word for this chapter. I was waiting for the fight the whole time. I'm glad Tyler stood up for Angelina and I hope he decides to break up with Katy, especially now that he knows how serious she is about their relationship. How could he stay with her when he wants her daughter?

Also, I now want caramel apple cake....

So much sexual tension its unreal. The part in the pool was crazy. How can her mother not see how her boyfriend treats her daughter? She's blind! And she acts all pissed at Angelina, she should be pissed at Tyler too.

And thanks for the shutout at the end. 21, what what?! Lol

Oh my, nothing like getting drunk and sleeping with your mothers boyfriend to make 4th of july entertaining. Lol. Good chapter. This one is just drama rama. Lol. More soon!

Very complicated.i liked the whole part where they went shopping. It was good to see a kind of human side to Katy. I almost feel bad for her because I can see where this is going to end up.

Good chapter. More soon? Sorry it took me so long to get to these!

Oh boy, this can go nowhere good, man. Tyler is crazy charismatic, but he's trouble. Also, I dont think Katy is such a bad person, I think shes incredibly insecure, but I think she loves Angelina genuinely. I like how each of the three main characters have some depth to them. None of them are bad people, its just a difficult situation, that is probably going to get worse with all the sneaking around.

Oh boy, this can go nowhere good, man. Tyler is crazy charismatic, but he's trouble. Also, I dont think Katy is such a bad person, I think shes incredibly insecure, but I think she loves Angelina genuinely. I like how each of the three main characters have some depth to them. None of them are bad people, its just a difficult situation, that is probably going to get worse with all the sneaking around.

I agree with Madison, what is Tyler getting out of this relationship? He's not even having sex with her? How strange. But yeah, this bound to get bad fast especially since her mother is already catching on to them.

God chapter. More soon?

Ooh, the chemistry is already starting. This is going to be trouble, especially since Angelinas mom is already catching on.

And also, if Tyler isnt really interested in the mom, why doesnt he just break it off. I mean, what is he getting out of this relationship? Its kinda weird.

But, I enjoyed this chapter. You made me so giddy for my vacation this weekend. Beach time!!