ok im not rying to be mean, but you are rushing things way to much. no guy would be that protective over a girl within the secon chapter. think more about how things would reall play out then you will bring in more readers. just sayin
It's been a while but I lov this story as for your questions i do think Brian should find out soon but I think she should tell him who she is and why she did it even though I knw he's probably gonna get angry well I know he is but i can't wait to see what happened and for your other questions I think she shouldn't go through with the plan well I do and them have her not take his things in the end but I can see that she does like him so that a no and for the last question Im not sure if I want the reason for all this to co e back I think I do but I'm not sure but i want her and brian to be together in the end. . anyways cant wait til the next chapter.
wow he got all made about something that happened in the past! and sweet etf xD umm it depends on if you want to keep it on todays date(craig) or earliers date (ronnie).... love this btw!
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ahem andyways johhnys an ass and cute at the same time i suspect him being gay and damn syn has no reason to be pissed