Heck - Comments

You have a very strong voice in this work and a fantastic hook. I especially loved your detailed description of him, I could see it in my minds eye playing like a movie and for me that's really important when I read. I am excited to see where you're going to take this. Subscribed. :)

Heck this was cute!
I found myself wondering what was going to happen. I liked that. I thought that it was cute.
I think that you managed to create something that someone will like to read, which as a writer is something we tend to do.
I like your style a lot and I think it's quite clever. I enjoyed reading this a lot. I really did. I am not entirely sure if I got a full story from it. It was cute, and I enjoyed it. I'm just not sure if I completely got it. I am not saying it's bad because I really enjoyed reading it. I think you are talented.
I liked your use of descriptions because I was able to picture it and I loved that. I think you managed to use the right words to create the right image for the reader. I really liked this a lot. I think you have a nice amount of talent and you know how to entice a reader.
Great!