Ache With Me - Comments

So they are totally in the "honeymoon phase" of dating. Give them a little time and I'm sure that initial glow will fade a bit and we'll hit a shit-storm of drama! I do find them impossibly adorable, though. I think my biggest worry is that he doesn't feel as strongly for her as she's starting to feel for him.

I absolutely adore this! It makes me nervous that everything is smooth sailing because they are just such a cute couple

I love that he's introducing her to his friends and that they seem to like her. Alex seems like she could become a comrade Hunter...well, your description of him over the last couple of chapters made me think of a stereotypical grunge band boy. Ha! Update soon!

I just read all of the chapters and I absolutely am in love with it so far!

TOO CUTE! TOO CUTE! STAHP! I CAN'T TAKE IT!

Have I mentioned how much I love your characters???? Lily, Max, and Eden...and Zina...All of them rock, so far! The message conversation was adorable. I can't believe Eden had never seen The Crow Anywho, I am in complete agreement with the bestie: Lily and Max need to go on an actual date, like, immediately! And I really want him to ask her, I don't want her to have to hint at it or suggest it herself. Come on, Max! Step it up!

So I really like this so far. I particularly like that she's a strong female OC who won't put up with anyone's shit, up to and including a famous artist. I can't wait to see what else she finds to like in Max, or if he turns out to really be an arrogant prick and this other side to him is actually the fake one instead of what he showed her at the coffee shop.