Angels - Comments

Thank goodness that I have found this precious gem because holy crap, I need this fic in my life.

This, so far, is just cute, sweet, nice, and just perfect. I keep reading this over and over again because this is great, you’re great, and you should update this sometime because it’s just so amazing, yes.<3

I just wonder whyyy Noah left, was it because Michelle? Because I don’t like Michelle already so I get Noah on a spiritual level despite him just being a little kid. I thought it was so cute that he just instantly liked Gertrude and he didn’t want her to leave, like “No, don’t leave me new friend.” I totally get it. And flippin’ Trevor, went all Dad mode instantly, that was cute. I can just imagine him flipping out and sending out a search party to look for Noah.

So yeah, I loved this and I hope you update it because I’d love to read more. c:

I agree, if revisions are made to the first chapter, it will only made a good thing great. :) I hope this gets updated soon!

Co-Could this be an Our Last Night fic?

I love them to pieces and I'm so happy that this exists, and it's already a wonderful start, so it will only be incredibly amazing when you edit it and all of those fancy things. This is already a great first chapter, which I totally envy because me and first chapters do not get along well at all. But I'm definitely subbing and reccing because I'm incredibly excited for this and can't wait to read more.