Written on Skin - Comments

@ theangrymortal
Well I'm glad you did! :) I think you are very talented!

@ XSoulXLoverX
In the end, I wrote up another chapter, I figured two people saying there should be more means there should be more!!! :D Thank you very much for both of your comments, as they've made me feel more confident about writing!

This was cute! I was wondering where this was going, but I liked it. I thought you wrote something that people should in fact read. I thought that you wrote this really well.
I really enjoyed their interaction, but I wished there was maybe a kiss or something. I liked the story behind it and I thought it was nicely written. I liked the narrator's worry at first and how this girl managed to explain things to her. I liked the flow of the piece and I read it so quickly because I got so into it right away. I didn't want it to be over. I liked their interaction, but I almost wished that maybe there was a little more. I liked how you used the "*" and honestly I'm not entirely sure why I did, but I just thought it added something nice and original.
I liked your approach and I like your writing style!