Strawberries - Comments

  • k i w i

    k i w i (100)

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    I like your layout it’s really cute.

    This entire drabble is really cute. I’m not sure why but I’m having a hard time imagining the scent of strawberries on a person, but it’s probably just me.

    This piece is really relatable. I’m sure there are tons of people who have things that remind them of a past lover and now they can’t even look at it, or in this case eat it.

    It might be lacking a little in emotional and descriptive depth. I don’t know I just wish there was a little more substance to it. In general, though, it’s still a very nice piece.

    Thanks for entering my contest!
    July 13th, 2014 at 08:36pm