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  • Vampire vengeance

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    Keep hoping one day I'll check and this beautiful story will be updated!
    January 5th, 2017 at 09:30pm
  • bobobo

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    Okay but its been like a year and im dyinnggg
    July 15th, 2015 at 11:42am
  • Trlr

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    When are you updating :(
    October 26th, 2014 at 08:27am
  • RiotOfTheWolves

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    I'm dying for an update over here ;) But I can be patient. ^^ And dying at the same time. o.o
    August 5th, 2014 at 05:08am
  • RiotOfTheWolves

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    I'm so excited to see what happens here! I read the first part in a single day. Haha. I'm definitely rooting for Patrick here. He's my favorite anyway ;) Plus, Pete just doesn't seem very endearing to me in this fic. His interactions and relationship with Anna remind me of a really bad relationship that screened up my life for a couple years >< I LOVE your writing, by the way. ^^ And if you want to be twitter pals, my name is @PulseRemissive :)
    July 24th, 2014 at 07:33pm
  • minorasmith

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    This whole story line is so amazing. I absolutely love the whole thing! I cannot wait for more!
    July 21st, 2014 at 04:19am
  • Let_it_go

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    Your writing is absolutely incredible. I can't handle it.
    Guh, Pete, Anna, and Patrick's story keeps getting better and better.

    Also I totally followed you on twitter, so you know. I'm not a massive twitter user, but I did. It happened. Haha.
    Keep up the amazing work, and please please please let someone be happy at the end of this.
    July 18th, 2014 at 03:43am
  • milesandmaisy

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    awww...Pete! Ugh, they need to get together! Even if I do love me some Patrick smut, she really belongs with Pete.

    And let me just say, reading your stuff makes me feel like the worst writer ever. It's amazing and everything I have written pales in comparison. Probably why none of it is on here :/

    <3 <3
    July 16th, 2014 at 09:24pm
  • Vampire vengeance

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    Oh poor Pete. I've said it before and I'll say it again you are such a talented writer this is the best story I've read on Mibba or any other site. Keep up the good work!
    July 16th, 2014 at 06:56pm
  • Flickering Lights

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    Another awesome chapter :) I like how you are using a lot of flashbacks and I hope we get back to the present soon to see what happens :) love this story and I can't wait for more Mr. Green keep up the great work Smile
    July 16th, 2014 at 06:41pm
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    @ khuckles
    Yes, I felt Zero was a necessary addition not at all motivated by my own desire for a french bulldog. ;)

    Thank you for your comment. You've made me feel better about the pacing and characterisation. Like you said, I don't want it to come off as just more chapters of TBB. It's supposed to be a sequel, so I want to write it as one--trying to convey character change and growth, and setting things up for what's to come. Thank you again! <3

    @ BehindSurrealEyes
    Omg, thank you! xo
    July 16th, 2014 at 03:21pm
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    @ holysmokes13
    Your comments always make me smile, seriously. I know, Anna and Stars actually liking each other was weird, although they are pretty similar people in some ways--though there's a very strong chance that Stars didn't realise who Anna was (I mean, unless she'd actively researched her, Stars wouldn't know what Anna looked like--there were only two pictures of her in the magazines, after all, and one was blurry, whilst the other was from a couple of years back. Plus, she had blonde hair on both pictures.) Can't wait to see what you think of the way this all comes together.

    @ birds ate my face
    *Jaws soundtrack* ;)

    @ Ali Cat
    I know, what a prize douche. He probably doesn't even realise how Anna might feel when she hears about the divorce and wonders why he hasn't even called her. Ah, Pete. You are a little dense sometimes. I hope things work out for her, too! And excellent job on your own fics, my dear!
    July 16th, 2014 at 03:18pm
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    @ sodapop curtis
    lmfao, I love that video.

    I LOVE THE BANNER TOO I WAS LIKE YES THIS IS THE ONE when I made it, ahahaha. And perhaps we shall see Juliet in the near future... ;)

    p.s. I forgive you. But PLEASE update soon! <3

    @ milesandmaisy
    I know, fecking evil aren't I. I knew everyone would be waiting for Patrick to turn up. Not yet, mes amigos. Have patience. ;) 'For now' being the operative words, lmfao. <3

    @ TheOnlyBurningCandle
    Oh yeah, something's gonna happen, alright. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts. Thank you for reading, as always!!
    July 16th, 2014 at 03:14pm
  • BehindSurrealEyes

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    Every time I get an e-mail I rush to check if its your story updated. I loooove this story and can't wait for a new chapter!
    July 12th, 2014 at 07:05pm
  • khuckles

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    Its been so long since I last commented that I felt I owed you another one! I am so happy that you have made a sequel. I don't think that you should be apologetic about the pace right now, its necessary in developing the characters and in creating a new level for the plot to follow. Sometimes I think people jump too fast into sequels, almost as though its another chapter instead of a sequel.

    Your writing is excellent, as usual, and I love the integrity of the characters (plus fhe fact that Anna now has a doggy!). I can't wait to keep reading. I have a feeling Anna will end up with Patrick in the end, but I am not sure yet. Maybe her best option is to find a third man, who isn't within this already wearisome triangle.

    Thanks for sharing your talents with us!
    July 12th, 2014 at 06:45pm
  • Ali Cat

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    Poor Anna omg. I'd be wondering the same thing. I'm so fucking frustrated I just wish she'd forget about Pete and stay with Patrick but that's impossible because Pete's Pete. Sighhh. I hope things work out for her because she's had a rough run.
    July 11th, 2014 at 04:28pm
  • santi santi

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    Waiting for Patrick to pop up, or Pete to show up and wreck everything
    July 11th, 2014 at 04:19pm
  • holysmokes13

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    As everyone, I thought we'd see Patrick in this chapter, but I think I know why is there this little hint, oh yeah. Patrick's surely going to find out about this - Stars, perhaps? I think it's amazing that Stars and Anna liked each other, maybe this is something for the future (come on, I know it is). But the only thing I can't really have a theory for is Pete's situation, why he hasn't called. My brain is burning but I can't find an answer. Oh, well, you'll give it away soon. I was laughing so hard at the image of Violet mocking on Anna for getting off at Patrick's expenses in the shower hahaha (I'd totally do that, too... Oops). I'm fangirling so hard to this story tbh:}
    July 11th, 2014 at 11:34am
  • Flickering Lights

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    I was waiting for something else to happenin the bar, like maybe a glimpse of Patrick at the bar. But I think something's going to happen pretty soon where either one of the three of them bump into each other. A gret chapter and I can't wait for more Mr. Green
    July 11th, 2014 at 08:14am
  • milesandmaisy

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    I totally thought she was going to run into Patrick in the bar!!

    After reading about Anna for so long, I am convinced she should be with Pete. Not that it will work out that way because life isn't really like that.

    I have no objections to you letting me have Patrick, even if it is just fiction. For now, anyway ;) Love you!!!
    July 11th, 2014 at 06:14am