I'm so excited to see what happens here! I read the first part in a single day. Haha. I'm definitely rooting for Patrick here. He's my favorite anyway ;) Plus, Pete just doesn't seem very endearing to me in this fic. His interactions and relationship with Anna remind me of a really bad relationship that screened up my life for a couple years >< I LOVE your writing, by the way. ^^ And if you want to be twitter pals, my name is @PulseRemissive :)
Your writing is absolutely incredible. I can't handle it. Guh, Pete, Anna, and Patrick's story keeps getting better and better.
Also I totally followed you on twitter, so you know. I'm not a massive twitter user, but I did. It happened. Haha. Keep up the amazing work, and please please please let someone be happy at the end of this.
awww...Pete! Ugh, they need to get together! Even if I do love me some Patrick smut, she really belongs with Pete.
And let me just say, reading your stuff makes me feel like the worst writer ever. It's amazing and everything I have written pales in comparison. Probably why none of it is on here :/
Oh poor Pete. I've said it before and I'll say it again you are such a talented writer this is the best story I've read on Mibba or any other site. Keep up the good work!
Another awesome chapter :) I like how you are using a lot of flashbacks and I hope we get back to the present soon to see what happens :) love this story and I can't wait for more keep up the great work
@ khuckles Yes, I felt Zero was a necessary addition not at all motivated by my own desire for a french bulldog. ;)
Thank you for your comment. You've made me feel better about the pacing and characterisation. Like you said, I don't want it to come off as just more chapters of TBB. It's supposed to be a sequel, so I want to write it as one--trying to convey character change and growth, and setting things up for what's to come. Thank you again! <3
@ holysmokes13 Your comments always make me smile, seriously. I know, Anna and Stars actually liking each other was weird, although they are pretty similar people in some ways--though there's a very strong chance that Stars didn't realise who Anna was (I mean, unless she'd actively researched her, Stars wouldn't know what Anna looked like--there were only two pictures of her in the magazines, after all, and one was blurry, whilst the other was from a couple of years back. Plus, she had blonde hair on both pictures.) Can't wait to see what you think of the way this all comes together.
@ birds ate my face *Jaws soundtrack* ;)
@ Ali Cat I know, what a prize douche. He probably doesn't even realise how Anna might feel when she hears about the divorce and wonders why he hasn't even called her. Ah, Pete. You are a little dense sometimes. I hope things work out for her, too! And excellent job on your own fics, my dear!
I LOVE THE BANNER TOO I WAS LIKE YES THIS IS THE ONE when I made it, ahahaha. And perhaps we shall see Juliet in the near future... ;)
p.s. I forgive you. But PLEASE update soon! <3
@ milesandmaisy I know, fecking evil aren't I. I knew everyone would be waiting for Patrick to turn up. Not yet, mes amigos. Have patience. ;) 'For now' being the operative words, lmfao. <3
@ TheOnlyBurningCandle Oh yeah, something's gonna happen, alright. I can't wait to see how everyone reacts. Thank you for reading, as always!!
Its been so long since I last commented that I felt I owed you another one! I am so happy that you have made a sequel. I don't think that you should be apologetic about the pace right now, its necessary in developing the characters and in creating a new level for the plot to follow. Sometimes I think people jump too fast into sequels, almost as though its another chapter instead of a sequel.
Your writing is excellent, as usual, and I love the integrity of the characters (plus fhe fact that Anna now has a doggy!). I can't wait to keep reading. I have a feeling Anna will end up with Patrick in the end, but I am not sure yet. Maybe her best option is to find a third man, who isn't within this already wearisome triangle.
Poor Anna omg. I'd be wondering the same thing. I'm so fucking frustrated I just wish she'd forget about Pete and stay with Patrick but that's impossible because Pete's Pete. Sighhh. I hope things work out for her because she's had a rough run.
As everyone, I thought we'd see Patrick in this chapter, but I think I know why is there this little hint, oh yeah. Patrick's surely going to find out about this - Stars, perhaps? I think it's amazing that Stars and Anna liked each other, maybe this is something for the future (come on, I know it is). But the only thing I can't really have a theory for is Pete's situation, why he hasn't called. My brain is burning but I can't find an answer. Oh, well, you'll give it away soon. I was laughing so hard at the image of Violet mocking on Anna for getting off at Patrick's expenses in the shower hahaha (I'd totally do that, too... Oops). I'm fangirling so hard to this story tbh:}
I was waiting for something else to happenin the bar, like maybe a glimpse of Patrick at the bar. But I think something's going to happen pretty soon where either one of the three of them bump into each other. A gret chapter and I can't wait for more