Just One Yesterday - Comments, page 3

mswrite85 (100)

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Dude, super excited about this!!!! To throw in a suggestion about different fonts of dialogue - I have done flashbacks on italics before to different the time. I know that's pretty cliche, but that's all I can throw at you from that standpoint lol. Super psyched on the continuation of this. YAY!!!

July 6th, 2014 at 03:51pm

milesandmaisy (100)

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I love this and I love Anna, but how are any of them ever going to be happy?? I am dying to find out!! (and I can't wait for Patrick to come back) <3

July 6th, 2014 at 02:41pm

Flickering Lights (100)

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Such a good first chapter and I can't wait for more. Looking forward to see what has happened to Patrick in the past three years. Keep up the good work

July 6th, 2014 at 01:43pm

Dont Panic (100)

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So many questions already, my excitement for this next instalment in Anna's life is beyond anything

July 6th, 2014 at 01:38pm