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  • k i w i

    k i w i (100)

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    Unfortunately this layout was really hard on my eyes and I had to switch to the default layout in order to read it. However, after I read it I switched it back and found that it goes very well with the story.

    What I like most about this drabble is that a very eerie and somber tone to it. For some reason it reminds me of The Stranger by Albert Camus. Anyway, I’m really not sure what to make of the story here. I can’t figure it out. It’s really mysterious, and I hope that was your intention because you achieved it.

    Thanks for entering my contest!
    July 14th, 2014 at 06:57pm