Everything I Didn't Say - Comments

Honestly, Louis needs to man up... and just face the reality. Lovely chapter though.

I want Alexa's mother to pack her shit and piss off, I love her Dad already and can't wait to see what he's going to do. Honestly, right now I'm not a fan of Louis. He just broke up with her suddenly, such a dick move Louis. I can't wait for another update.

I'm gonna make this short and simple.

I love this.

I want you to update.

Please.

Thank you!

I feel so bad for Alexa! I can't even imagine what she is going through. It would be so horrible having to go through that situation and having to be fearful all the time about someone just up and leaving you. I bet she is going to have some serious mental trauma after everything that she has been through the poor girl!

Ironically enough- I subscribed to this story a few weeks back and decided I'd read it when I came across some free time, I just found that a little comical! It must have been meant to be!

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I am a sucker for babies. It's an almost "taboo" subject in the fanfiction world, so anytime I can get a good story with that budding family element, I'm generally sucked right in with no hopes of return- and this story was no exception.

I like the dream element- its sort of obvious with her situation that Louis is never far form her mind, but those dreams kind of...put us in that mind set, that idea of 'even if he did come back, would he run again?' it's a very real element that so many people would overlook, and I'm so glad you didn't. It's a really powerful scene, and a great way to kick things off.

I spent a good portion of the first few chapters praying that Lou wouldn't stumble upon the babies by fault -and I was left violently cringing when her mother sold her out. But as cringe-worthy as that moment was, it was perfect. The idea of money and infamy is a cruel, but sadly real one- and I love that you didn't sugar coat it.

I just want to hug everyone- even Eleanor, I personally wouldn't be that wonderful in such a situation, but I comment her for being a good person and knowing that it was the right thing, no matter how damn bad it hurt. I also love Lou's approach to it all -so many people would just jump at it and risk saying something stupid or doing something they'll come to regret- and I think giving himself a moment to breathe and process was the right way to go.

Well done! I can't wait to see where you take this (also, if I read correctly and it's a series, I am so excited for Niall!)

That broke my heart, such a shitty way to find out about the twins but at least he knows now. Thank goodness for Harry, let's just hope that Louis does go to see Alexa and soon so they can talk and he can meet his twins.

Just read the last two chapters and WHAT?!!??!!! I mean what a horrible mom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Poor Louis that he found out that way, I can't wait to see how Alexa reacts to the fact that EVERYBODY KNOWS!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job with the writing as usual!! Can't wait to see what happens now!!

Poor Louis... that's very much unfair towards him. I really feel bad for him. And I still think Carol is a psycho cunt.

I didn't see that coming, how could Carol do this to her own daughter? I don't understand, a part of me wants Louis to read the article so he knows but then that is such a horrible way for him to find out. I can't wait to see what happens next and I want to see how Alexa deals with this and her mother.

WAHT THE ACTUAL FUCK?! WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME! NONOONONONONONONONO NOOOOOOO

The time is right... NOW.
Update soon.

Arilia is the perfect best friend, always wanting to know the juicy details of sexy dreams. This chapter is a really good filler, I can't wait to see what happens next and when Louis comes in. Hopefully Alexa's dream won't come true and her heart won't get crushed.

Just finished reading the three chapters.... DID NOT SEE THAT COMING. hahaha love your writing it keeps me on the edge of my seat wanting to know what happens next!

Hoooo my gooooood... this was such an amazing twist! I did not expect that whatsoever... it actually sort of broke my heart? Like what the fuck, Louis? What an asshole move to leave and never even pick up the phone.

I really like where this story is going, although it did break my heart into pieces to find out how hurt she is by all of it... and that she's just alone in it! The details of that, like how she went through everything alone really pulled on my heartstring!

But such an amazing story so far and I really am looking forward to the moment that Louis finds out... wow, Esther, please update soon... my heart can't take this!

That was such a brilliant twist that I didn't see coming, well done Esther. Now I'm not so angry with Louis, although he still did leave Alexa so I'm still angry at him about that.

I really like that these stories are connected and have the girls in each other's stories, that's really nice and I love seeing how close the girls are.

I can't wait to read the next chapter.

No! Everything was going so well and it's obvious that Alexa needed Louis, but than he just left her? I have many words that I want to call Louis right now and none of them are nice.

How dare he just leave her like that, they could at least stayed there and talked about it. But no, he left though it would be confusing and hurtful not knowing Alexa had babies. However Louis needs to stop being a jerk and pull Alexa back into his arms, right now.

I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, I'm loving this story already.

Wait... what? What just happened? Come again?

I am so confused as to what the fuck is going on with Louis' reaction? Did he not know she had kids? Are the kids his or not? What the fuck!

Nonetheless, I do really like the start of this story and it has me really curious as to where you are planning on taking this... and at this point I just wanna know more and I think it is very unfair that you only posted such a short first chapter...

What the fuck, Esther! My brain can't handle this, please update soon!