The dialogue between Brooklyn and Clara was absolutely hilarious. It's exactly what I think of for a couple talking about their wedding. With both of them being so indecisive and nervous about having every little thing right.
Aww, I can't believe he's having an affair before their even married! It's so sad that Clara had to find out like that, too. I can't imagine her having to confront him like that and tell him to get his stuff out of the apartment.
This was a really well written story that had a lot going on, and I loved it. I love how it demonstrated all the ins and outs of a couple and how things aren't always as perfect as they seem. You did an amazing job with this story!
Aww, I can't believe he's having an affair before their even married! It's so sad that Clara had to find out like that, too. I can't imagine her having to confront him like that and tell him to get his stuff out of the apartment.
This was a really well written story that had a lot going on, and I loved it. I love how it demonstrated all the ins and outs of a couple and how things aren't always as perfect as they seem. You did an amazing job with this story!