Make a Wish on Our Sorry Little Hearts. - Comments

Jack at the end is so fuding cute and I just adqsoifnbsadlfnhasihnf

Hey ya! Thanks for the feedback, and thank you for reading my mess of a story. lol, when I started writing this I was kinda going for making it realistic and stuff, so some of the parts are kind of my interpretation of like how things went that they've said in interviews before and such, because I don't know really au stories feel weird to me so I felt a need to keep it somewhat realistic to things that might have happened, although I gave up on doing that as much in the end/middle.

I know I'm pretty terrible, because there are parts that I like as well and parts that I don't like/had trouble making work for me, but I basically wrote the entire thing to see if I could do it because usually when I start stories, long ones, that is, I never finish them. So it was really a challenge to me to end up finishing it, and, without spoiling it, I know the end is terrible, I keep telling myself I'm going to fix it but I have to find time to do that. So yeah thank you for reading and for the feedback and such I'll think of getting a beta! c:

okay so there are parts I love and parts I don't like so much- like with most stories. there are some grammar mistakes but idk maybe just a beta is needed? But I love the story line and the characters and the references.

I've only read the first chapter and can I just say: someone's watched straight to dvd :p

I know but like I hate chick flicks so I thought I'd like make it not turn out well haha, thanks for reading my novel length story by the way! <3333

This is so cute and so wonderful and I love Zack and I love Jack and I have read all the way up to the most recent chapter and shit, that didn't go well for Zack at all. Poor baby. And they don't even apologize about their dog just going crazy on him? Jesus! Who needs Sandy and her bitchy family, anyway? Take your shoes.

AND THEY TOOK THE GUITAR. EXCUSE ME THAT IS PERSONAL PROPERTY KAY THANKS.

And Zack panicking and I just wanted to hug him and Jack was so calm and helpful and it was really really nice to see that side of him, really sweet, and the end of the chapter was just so adorable, it killed me. Hopefully they get the guitar back and no one ever interacts with Sandy and her shit family, like, ever again.

I really like this story, it's adorable and well done.

Oooh thanks I'll fix that (: thanks for commenting xo.

Heyy nice start :) I hate to nit pick but I go to Towson University and it's like ingrained in our minds to let people know that its Towson not Townsend lol

But I like your story a lot so far :D