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  • anotherteenwriter

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    @ brxndneweyes Haha yeah I'd like to think so too
    July 19th, 2014 at 10:09am
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    WOW THAT HURT ZACK IS GOING TO COME BACK A CHANGED MAN IN LIKE TWO YEAR S AND THEY CAN LOVE EACH OT HER FOR RE AL
    July 18th, 2014 at 11:06pm
  • anotherteenwriter

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    @ thegrandpineapple Yeah I thought it'd be cool to switch it up and show how the bad guy feels about everything. Thanks for your comment!
    July 14th, 2014 at 10:15am
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    I really like that this story i from the POV of the person doing the heartbreaking instead of the person getting their heart broken. Still sad though. But great :)
    July 12th, 2014 at 10:10pm
  • thegrandpineapple

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    I really like that this story i from the POV of the person doing the heartbreaking instead of the person getting their heart broken. Still sad though. But great :)
    July 12th, 2014 at 10:10pm
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    @ AmeliaDef Thanks! I didn't like mean Zack either, poor Jack
    July 12th, 2014 at 08:27pm
  • AmeliaDef

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    This is good and sad. I hate mean Zack where he leaves Jack all the time :((
    July 12th, 2014 at 12:26pm