The Happiest I've Ever Been - Comments

Oops, repeated comment.

I'm not a fan of All Time Low, but by the end of the first chapter I felt I knew the characters mentioned pretty well. It was really well-written, and if there were any mistakes I didn't pick up on them. The first chapter was very cute and happy, but I was a little confused about why she felt so worried about being pregnant when they were so close. I felt that when he asked her to marry him it would have been a perfect moment to bring it up; it really would have added to the cuteness, I think. It's so good that they had such a happy ending, though. With it all being so cute, I'm glad it ended the way it did.

I'm also glad that the chapters weren't too long, because that could have made it tiring to read, I think. The lengths were pretty good. The story is really good and very nice to read.

I really liked this story! I'm a big fan of All Time Low, so that helped lol. I'm not sure how to express it, I like how you wrote the two chapters, they focused on Meg and Alex with their baby and wedding announcement (Off topic: I loved the part when Jack is going on about being pregnant himself, with a bag of flour stuffed under his shirt lol, also him twerking in the delivery room) Meg strikes me as a badass and obviously stubborn girl, I haven't read the previous one yet, but after reading this I definitely want to! Also, the part with Alex's speech, it was definitely one of my favorite parts in the story. And I'm quite fond of Remembering Sunday, it's a beautiful song :) I like the long chapters, and the layout, simple without clashing colors and flashing fonts lol. This is definitely one of my favorite ATL fanfics, I look forwardto reading the previous story. Great job!

Aww this was an overload of cuteness and adorableness. I really liked how the story started because it just pull you in There was another reason why Meg was up at 3 AM that night - because it just makes me want to know why she would be up at such a late hour. I also liked the fact that in transitions into the past and it comes full circle to were it started.
I do agree with @bucky.angel about the backstory of characters if you don't know the band, but it was still great.
I'm glad that there was a happy ending as well.

This is really adorable and I’m glad it had a happy ending, would love to see a sequel of this for sure! I loved the fact that this was a two part and wasn’t a massive cluster of words that was a mile and a half long. I always imagine that doctors and nurses who deliver babies get used to people acting so insane and crazy while this is happening. The only mistakes I can think there would be would be some random spelling mistakes, but other than that it was absolutely fantastic! I don’t normally read All Time Low stories, but I’m really glad that I gave this one a chance because it made me really happy and made my day! Since it’s already over, I do plan on recommending it! Keep up the fantastic work!

This is really adorable and I’m glad it had a happy ending, would love to see a sequel of this for sure! I loved the fact that this was a two part and wasn’t a massive cluster of words that was a mile and a half long. I always imagine that doctors and nurses who deliver babies get used to people acting so insane and crazy while this is happening. The only mistakes I can think there would be would be some random spelling mistakes, but other than that it was absolutely fantastic! I don’t normally read All Time Low stories, but I’m really glad that I gave this one a chance because it made me really happy and made my day! Since it’s already over, I do plan on recommending it! Keep up the fantastic work!

I liked the way you enveloped the happy memory in between her worry about telling him that she's pregnant. You effectively changed the tone of the story and I think that helped to get the point across that she's quite concerned about telling him, although I did find myself questioning exactly why she wasn't happier to get it off her chest, especially if they're at the point in their relationship where they both genuinely want to get married.

I realise it's a fan fiction (and in a fandom I am unfamiliar with) but the start of the second part of the first chapter was a bit jolting for me to read, suddenly switching from this personal moment between two characters to rattling off lots of unfamiliar names with little backstory/relevance. I'm not sure if it would have made more sense if I was familiar with the fandom, but a little more explanation might be something to keep in mind.

It was great that you kept Alex consistent with his rambling when he's nervous. I immediately knew exactly how he felt during the second part, and it does add a bit of light humour to the story too. Because of that, I think you did a good job at setting up your characters, whether that's for a short or a long story, so good job