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  • deathXbeforeXdisco

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    You are awesome, and Spencer is bad ass.
    I absolutely cannot wait to read more!
    You have me hanging off each word :3
    Just... Perfect...
    September 11th, 2014 at 03:27am
  • OvercastGirl

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    THE FUCK??
    September 5th, 2014 at 05:36pm
  • OvercastGirl

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    You go, girl! Mr. Green
    August 27th, 2014 at 09:31pm
  • The Great View

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    Hey, guys, check out my new story, One Time Thing.
    If you like this story, I'm sure you'll like the other one.

    Thanks! (:
    August 27th, 2014 at 02:13am
  • mgn.

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    really super interested in this!
    August 21st, 2014 at 10:10pm
  • OvercastGirl

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    AWWW!
    August 21st, 2014 at 08:30pm
  • mgn.

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    love it!
    August 12th, 2014 at 09:41am
  • Lunacy

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    Oh, maaan. I adored this! Spencer is such a believable character and the ending for the second chapter was amazing! It's such an interesting story altogether! In Love
    July 31st, 2014 at 05:10am
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    @ tiffany danielle
    thank so much for the comment. it truly inspires me. and i will do better to spellcheck (:
    July 30th, 2014 at 05:12am
  • tiffany danielle

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    I really like the layout as well as the tone of this story. You did a fabulous job giving me insight on Spencer's character without giving too much away and I enjoyed all the details that gave me a taste of her life before she made a great transition. I could feel a great deal of her emotions and it made me feel more connected with her as a reader and you as a writer. The only thing I could possibly suggest on a story so lovely is that you maybe once over one more time to catch little mistakes in spelling. Otherwise, it was absolutely perf. I really would like to read more. I hope you continue this soon!c:
    July 29th, 2014 at 11:30pm