And We Danced - Comments

Uh oh, being in love with your best friend's boyfriend is never a good time, especially when your best friend knows it. It's sad because you can tell that Vanessa and Alexander would have been good together if Anissa hadn't tried so hard to keep them apart for so long.

I love how you left this with a very open ending, leaving the reader to imagine what happened next between them.

This was a really great one shot! It had an excellent amount of story to it, while still being an easy reading length. You packed a lot into short story, which is hard to do at times, but you did a great job at it!

Uh oh, being in love with your best friend's boyfriend is never a good time, especially when your best friend knows it. It's sad because you can tell that Vanessa and Alexander would have been good together if Anissa hadn't tried so hard to keep them apart for so long.

I love how you left this with a very open ending, leaving the reader to imagine what happened next between them.

This was a really great one shot! It had an excellent amount of story to it, while still being an easy reading length. You packed a lot into short story, which is hard to do at times, but you did a great job at it!

This was a great story. I was hooked and I couldn't avert my eyes away for a second. I thought that you really did a nice job of bringing forth that tension between them. I could tell that Alex wanted Vanessa just as much as she wanted him. It was so believable and so well thought out.

Like the comment below mentions about the gif, I think that was just perfectly done. I think you really did capture the essence of that through writing the story. You brought the gif out through your story and I thought that was a nice touch.
You're talented, you have a great sense of style. You are very crisp in your writing and you manage to bring forth a lot of emotion. Forbidden love is always an interesting plot line to play with, and I think you did it well. You truly wrote a great story.

Once again like the comment below mentions, a sequel would be fantastic! I think that there is so much still left to say, even though I found this to be a well completed story. I think that you are just talented. I loved how you started off the story using descriptions because that just hooked me in and I could imagine the whole thing. Reading this felt like I was watching a movie.

Great story!

This is a great story. I love the plot because he is in fact her best friend's boyfriend. Somehow, it makes it hotter, knowing that their are forbidden to be with each other. I like that he was her friend first, but being with David, she couldn't do anything about it. You managed to captivate the gif with what you created very well. The words drew me more and more in. I've told you that you are an amazing writer and it is shown in this story. It was cute, sexy and even though it was so wrong, it felt so right. To be honest, I will love to read a sequel of this. I will like to know what happens to them after the dance. Maybe reading a little insight of both of their lives would be great to read. You should think about it because it is an awesome plot to follow.

Great Story! I'm in the same contest, but your story is amazing. I 'm sure you'll win. :) Good Luck!
love, Christie