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    Loved it!
    April 7th, 2015 at 05:18am
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    Loved it!
    April 7th, 2015 at 05:18am
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    Oh no! Brian's going to lose his mind. I have no idea who could have summoned her but I hope you update soon!
    February 14th, 2015 at 11:22pm
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    Babies on the way! Are all the girls going to become pregnant now? And I hope nothing goes wrong no that they're rescued Mattie's girl.

    I HOPE YOU'RE FEELING BETTER Hug
    October 25th, 2014 at 02:36am
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    So...she lost a child? And now she has to conceive again to use her unborn child's energy to defeat evil? That's interesting. I have even more questions now haha
    October 13th, 2014 at 01:35am
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    I don't understand why you're not happy with this because I love it! I loved her using her powers, but do they always leave her so zapped of energy? Or did that just happen because of the ritual she'd just done, and not being completely strong with her powers yet? I loved it though. Thank you for updating!
    October 9th, 2014 at 08:31am
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    Oh dear. Trouble's coming soon, isn't it?
    September 16th, 2014 at 09:24am
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    I love it so far im glad lucy is back keep going with it
    September 9th, 2014 at 03:02am
  • Hannahdoll

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    I don't care how short it was, this chapter was amazing. :)
    I'm glad Lucy is back for real.
    August 22nd, 2014 at 03:47pm
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    You said in the author's note of last chapter that this one was going to be smokin'. Holy crap, you weren't kidding. And I literally laughed out loud at Matt's comment. I love the dynamic of this group, so much. Thanks for the update!
    August 22nd, 2014 at 05:12am
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    I love this!! I've always had a thing for past lives and I'm enjoying this so much. The chemistry between Brian and Lucy is beautiful and I really hope that Lucy gets all her memories back after a delicious night with Brian. Can't wait for the next update :)
    August 8th, 2014 at 06:25pm
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    WHOAWHOAWHOA!

    That was hot. And perfect. I hope all she needed was the added connection to regain her memory!
    August 8th, 2014 at 07:27am
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    I love this story. I'm so into things like this....the being reborn thing reminds me a lot of Witches of East End, which I'm just in love with too.
    August 8th, 2014 at 04:14am
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    Lucy was burned at the stake?! That is so sad! I'm curious to know what happened the second time that Brian lost her. And to be in such an abusive household her whole life is just horrible. I hope Brian gets justice for her haha. I love this!
    July 25th, 2014 at 04:50am
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    Another short comment! I really have no idea where you come up with this stuff but oh my god, I love your brain. So much.
    July 20th, 2014 at 07:04am
  • HeatherLH9007

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    I'm so excited to see where you take this story. It's already caught my attention and it's only two chapters in. Keep up the amazing work! I look forward to the next update!
    July 19th, 2014 at 10:44am
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    Number one, you have no idea how excited I was to read in the A/N of Just a Kiss that you're writing new stories. I mean, obviously I'm sad that your other stories aren't going anywhere as of yet because I adore them all, but I can't complain for having something new to gush over. I read this and the other one very briefly though I didn't really have time to do anything other than subscribe and recommend both. But I just re-read this one and now I can finally comment.

    I love what you've done so far. You always write the best introductions - there's just enough, no chance of giving away too much. It's obvious how confused she is with what exactly is going on. I can't wait to find out as she does! <3
    July 15th, 2014 at 11:27pm
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