Tunnel Vision - Comments

I can't find the words to say how much I love this story. And it's only been two chapters! Original plot and it's sooo well written. Please, please, update!

Can't wait for more xx

amazing. it's so good to see that there is a neymar story I can actually enjoy. your writing is amazing, can't wait for more. xx (:

Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next x

Yet, another amazing chapter. I adore the realness of this and how you're trying to keep everything accurate. The small details are key to a good story.

Already two chapters in, and I love the Neymar you have created, so very raw. I think not introducing the lead female yet is wonderful because it means you're taking your time so it doesn't come out rushed or predictable.

Like I said before, the description in this is absolutely flawless so props to you.

Thank you for writing such a good story. It's definitely going in my next recommendations blog!

Keep it up!

Loved the first chapter and I can't wait to see where you take this x

Loved The first chapter, can't wait for more :)

Love how you started this story! And not just introduced the female lead right away. The background information is always crucial to a story.
The way you introduced everyone in his life was done well, especially his son because I know sometimes authors like to write off certain people but you didn't, so extra kudos to that!

I'm really excited to see where this is going because the story like is really intriguing to me. You're use of description is really nice, plus, it being in third person is easy to follow! And, of course, grammar and spelling is quite nice, too.

Definitely subscribing and recommending and always commenting. This might just started my spark in writing futbol fanfics again!

Please keep this up and it's now certainly not trash at all!