This is pretty adorable, even though I'm not a part of this fandom it still grabbed my attention and was a really good read! So kudos for that! Other than that thestory itself was written quite well, good punctuation and all that. Was very easy to read as well which is a good quality!
(sorry if this posts twice, my phone hates me - apparently)
@ SecretPiggyMafia Hey, thanks :D They're characters from the last 3 gens of Pokémon (naturally I write more about the villains than the Pokemon themselves :P ). Sadly my search engine often sends me dodgy sites when I'm looking for innocent stuff so I thought it'd make a good laugh in the story xD Glad that you enjoyed :D
Hehe, I don’t know anything about this fandom or its characters, but I found it funny, nonetheless. I think it was a really good idea. Lol at the porn site thing. :)
Thank you so much :D I was SO nervous posting that one up cos it's totally out of my usual field. I based N there a little on me; I still have meltdowns occasionally and I'm old enough to be his mom :P
I based the internet research on well...the internet cos 9 times out of 10, it shows you porn, even if you don't look for it xD
LOL, awesome. I love the ide of crazed checkout cashier and how a lot of the research was porn. Poor N, that sounds like some of the kids when they're about to have a meltdown. Great job