September 2nd, 2015 at 12:59am
Give Me a Reason - Comments
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I just wanted to say I recently found this story and I love it! I hope you continue with it and update again soon!September 1st, 2015 at 08:19pm
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@ pawnsinplay
Thanks, friend! I posted the first 2 chapters of the new story last night (actually the prologue and chapter one.) I titled it "I'm Preying on You Tonight (Animals)" But you can find it on my story page in my profile. I'm pretty sure I'm going to have a lot of fun with the whole series since I plan to have a story for each of the guys. I've got subscribers but no comments as of yet so I hope it's good. I know you'll let me know what you think.
February 4th, 2015 at 03:43am -
Stupid Larry. He makes me so mad. But the guys know just how to handle him and I love it. I loved this chapter! And I'm glad you're back writing again
Also...I've read this series about a Navy SEAL team, I think it was specialized Team Sixteen, written by Suzanne Brockman. One of my favorite book series. So imagining the guys as former Navy SEALS who are now PI's...I'm down. I am so down it's not even funny. I'm ready for it!February 4th, 2015 at 03:22am -
...I was literally staring like this as I was reading:
And now I'm totally speechless. Seriously, though, it's about time haha. And now I just wanna know who's at the door and what's going to happen with Larry! I feel like he's going to find out about Troy, somehow, and try to use him against Brian and Grace. Mainly Grace. I can't wait for another update! November 18th, 2014 at 05:36am -
Just found this, and I can't wait for the next update! LOVE IT!November 16th, 2014 at 05:09am
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Woo! Finally ;) that was totally worth the wait.November 15th, 2014 at 05:12pm
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Woohoo! Go, Grace!!! I'm in love with this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Her mother pisses me off. What kind of parent does that to their child?! Ugh.November 9th, 2014 at 11:06pm -
I'm so proud of Grace. She stood up to the skank and to her mother :)November 9th, 2014 at 05:00pm
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I was worried that when that bag grabbed her, she'd have a setback or flashback to the times Troy grabbed her in the same way. I'm glad that she didn't and that she told her off. Her speech hit the nail on the head and made me laugh. I hope this is the end of her, but I also hope that this isn't the end of Cheyanne, she seems sweet. It's not her fault that her sister is a douche canoe
HER MOTHER THOUGH OMG! I hope she gets what's coming to her
Again, I was worried that the conversation would be another setback and that Brian would have to pull her back again. I'm so afraid for her and for Brian! Obviously Troy is going to find his way to California, somehow, and maybe even her parents, and it's going to be ugly, I know it. But as terrified as I am, I also can't wait. Is that wrong?! 
ALSO...the next chapter. If it's going to be a continuation of this one...holyholyholy. I can't wait for it. Take your time, you need to look after yourself first, but still. CAN'T WAIT.November 9th, 2014 at 03:52am -
No more interruptions, damn it lol! Seriously though, Jimmy is the best at finding the right time to interrupt people. But they've been married for how long now? I'm surprised Brian hasn't started to twitch. NO MORE INTERRUPTIONS!
But all in all, I loved the chapter. Michelle is so sweet. And I can't wait to see what that ho is going to try to pull at the barbeque. And what will happen after Thanks for the update! October 27th, 2014 at 05:54am -
Holy moly, girl! I'm sorry to hear that. Take care of yourself. Don't stress too much (easy for me to say, I know) and please, please, please keep me posted on what's going on. I'm a worry wart, if you haven't already noticed. Feel free to email me anytime too! I was going to email you just to see if you were okay but didn't know if that would be okay with you or not. Anyways, I'm keeping my fingers crossed for you!
October 26th, 2014 at 05:26pm -
@ pawnsinplay
I'm working on the next chapter, but my concentration is divided as I'm sitting here in limbo in the hospital. Waiting on biopsy results from a scope and looking at the possibility of getting an angiogram done to map the status of my blocked SMA and the collaterals I've developed. The leading theory is that I've got ischemia in my small intestine because of the damage to my SMA from my disease and the collateral blood pathways just aren't doing the job good enough any more. Our maybe they never were and it's been a slow deterioration. I could be looking at angioplasty and a stent, or the big scary- BIPASS. The good news is that I still have no disease activity, so there's that I suppose.
I'm hoping to get the next chapter done and up soon because I have nothing better to do than lay here and wait.
October 26th, 2014 at 12:32pm -
Started this again from the beginning because I love it so much. I'm hoping for an update soon! October 26th, 2014 at 10:22am
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Again, 2 updates in a row. You're spoiling us
I do feel like you're doing Grace justice. She's still healing emotionally but I can see how tough she is underneath, and how she's becoming more and more like herself. She doesn't take any shit from anyone and I feel like that's going to be really important later when/if/we know it's when the douchecanoe comes back. I don't know who I'm more pissed with, Larry or the bitch brigade in Johnny's house. WHY CAN'T THEY JUST LEAVE GRACIE AND BRIAN ALONE TO LOVE EACH OTHER.
I really, really just loved these chapters. I was actually bored the other night and went on a massive re-read of my favorite Mibba stories...a list which consists of mostly yours. And I was wondering when you were going to update again. And you just did, so hooray! I am a happy girl. Thank you for these chapters!October 9th, 2014 at 08:40am -
2 updates in one night, woohoooooo!
So chapter 6 just made me feel so sad for Gracie. I can understand how she'd feel like she betrayed Brian, but it's not true at all. And being afraid that he'll come after her...well. Can hardly blame her for that either. And it's totally going to happen, isn't it? IT TOTALLY IS. I KNOW IT. I CAN SMELL IT. And then Brian will go all crazy protective and I'm getting ahead of myself. Loved this chapter!
As for chapter 7...I can not believe that her mother would seriously pay bail for that prick! Is she out of her ever-loving mind?! I hate her so much! Almost as much as I hate him. But I love Pops and Suzy, they're both so sweet. And they're married now! Brian takes this protection business seriously, as he should. I love him. I love this. Thank you for updating!September 22nd, 2014 at 04:29am -
Uh oh, I smell trouble when he gets released. And I say when because we all know it's happening, through bail or escape or just somehow. But she and Brian are the cutest!September 13th, 2014 at 10:51am
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Brian and Gracie are so cute!! I love this story so much! Can't wait for more!
August 19th, 2014 at 03:14pm -
Lol Zacky and Charlie, I love them so much. They're so perfect together. And the way that Brian's taking care of Grace and the speech he gave her, just...okay. All this cuteness and perfection is too much for me but I love it and I need more! <3August 7th, 2014 at 04:00am
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Love love love this story! I'm excited for more chapters!!! July 25th, 2014 at 04:05pm
Thanks. I've actually been working on the next chapter, it's just been slow going. I hope to have something up soon. I'm one of those authors who will jump from one story to another when the muse hits so i bounce between stories like crazy. I hope you check out my other stories too!