Looking Up - Comments

Nah, no way. This chapter tied together as well as resolved some things. And and and They love each other!!!

I really like this chapter!

@ midnightmssuki
Oh I still love you. You are quite adorable. Wasn't going to say anything about you leaving us hanging but since you brought it up... Maybe we'll get a bonus chapter to make up for the abrupt cut off? But otherwise I'm perfectly happy waiting A WHOLE WEEK to find out if she takes Daisy's advice and asks Jon about what they "are doing?"
Nuge. Castle Walls. Danni. My favorites. An update would be nice. Anytime you feel like it. Maybe for my birthday. In October. Or whenever.

I loved it!!!

@ Thatmom
I'm not sure what possessed me to do that. Pretty sure it was my subconscious when I blindly handed out careers to the brothers. I was shaking my head at myself over that when I went back and looked. In my mind, I was just giving them all tree/flower/hippie-ish names and then that happened. Eeep!

I like linking them too. And since I never plan for that, it's always interesting to figure out how I can make it work.

P. S. I love how you link your stories:)

Ash= firefighter? That's funny:) Can't wait to see how this dinner goes !

@ Auntiebabs
One day I'm gonna revisit my other Shea story. I really miss Camille. And Danni. I miss her (and the Nuge!) too.

Guessing you don't love me for leaving that with a something of a cliffhanger, huh?

Thanks @Jayess & @midnightmssuki. Now I have another story to read while I'm waiting for that dinner that Jon is cooking...

Oh. I already read it. Ok I'll reread it. Then I'll read everything that @midnightmssuki has written or recommends...

It was the alliteration of Dr. Daisy the Dentist that made her name a bit more memorable. Quick google search and your story popped up, there aren't many stories about Daisy dentists on mibba. Last name of Bishop, little town outside vancouver, bunch of sibs, Daisy's team the Oilers, all the details matched so I was certain.

@ Jayess
Yes, I linked another one. Rose and Daisy are sisters and this takes place in the 12-13 season and Daisy in the 13-14 season. Also, good memory since I posted that almost a year ago.

Aha! You keep linking your storines. Rose Bishop's sister Daisy Bishop the dentist is the female protangonist in Holding Your Ground with Shea, isn't she? Although this would be before that story is set since Daisy is still in Vancouver in Ch. 6.

@ Thatmom
That's what I like to hear. It's means my nodding and laughing along isn't crazy.

As I was reading this I'm nodding and laughing especially at Pat's antics at the end. Loved it!!!

@ Auntiebabs
I'm just glad you found it. Welcome! :)

This was my favorite chapter (so far). I really loved throwing Pat in at the end with his drunk yet sage advice. Maybe a spinoff will need to happen for him. I promise also that Jon will address his behavior in the beginning. I will not let him off the hook for that.

@ defaultmemory
It's been fun giving a little more life to Dan and Lennon's backstory. And yes, someone sign him soon. Please.

How am I just finding this story today? Read it all at once and LOVE it! It's weird precouple Lennon and Dan but good. Kind of worried about Brandon & her. Don't like that hookup. So glad Rose is giving Jon another chance after his lame predatory advances at the ball. He should have to work a little harder for it. I'd love to see a sincere apology, not ignoring how they first met. It can't be forgotten. He really was an asshole. Pat's drunken insight at the end of this last chapter made me laugh. He needs a girl too!! Again I am SO HAPPY I found this!!! Can't wait for more....

I like how this chapter has a little of Things mentioned in lennon's story.

Oh and someone please pick up carbomb and whitney soon

@ rubi67
Glad you like it so much!

Love all the characters personalities, I just found my new favorite story! Looking forward to the next update :)