I like the attention to detail, no terrible rifts in the plot and I think I like the way you don't time skip around like I've seen before out of other writers. The 'perfect brother' made my blood boil, not to mention Juliette’s father. It just reminded me of moments in my life where I wished looks I gave could kill. So I appreciate the sense of realness. Like where parts of the story made me realize I’m glad I don't have to take calculus anymore. Or those parts that you went and described the King. I found that I think I like his flying form. I mean come on, somehow you made a part male part lizard King sound pretty attractive and didn't even try. I know this story never got another update, but if it continues, I'll definitely be watching. By the way, nice tap into the art of fate. I like what the teacher said.
Update; I love the way you constructed these characters. You give them personalities that are so amusing, but some of them aren't even trying to have character and soul at all. It's so nonchalant. But that whole cheeseburger thing was just downright cute. I appreciate every corner of this story so far. Great job.
Update; I love the way you constructed these characters. You give them personalities that are so amusing, but some of them aren't even trying to have character and soul at all. It's so nonchalant. But that whole cheeseburger thing was just downright cute. I appreciate every corner of this story so far. Great job.