Just stumbled across this, and just wanted to leave a quick comment saying I enjoyed it. It was a cute story, and I liked how it tied up neatly. :) You definitely didn't stray from the main story line, which I commend you for, because often authors tend to do that without realizing because they feel the need to add to the story. But you didn't do that and it's perfect the way it is. :) Great job! You're an awesome writer! :)
LOL Well If I could be stuck in an elevator with maybe Jack, I wouldn't complain, Anyway, I love this. Its so different and just fun to read. I get all excited when I get an email saying you update. Now I was try to calmly wait for your next update! Oh and I'm your first! =D I'm gonna refrain from making any inappropriate comments though.
LOL Well If I could be stuck in an elevator with maybe Jack, I wouldn't complain, Anyway, I love this. Its so different and just fun to read. I get all excited when I get an email saying you update. Now I was try to calmly wait for your next update! Oh and I'm your first! =D I'm gonna refrain from making any inappropriate comments though.