Love Hurts - Comments

It's really good

Good job on the story hope to see more stuff in the future.

@ Glytch
Alright ! I`m in the middle of fixing everything ill go through and space everything ! Thank you for the suggestion.

@ serinasuffocate101
I did read it. Its quick paced. Might I suggest a bit more spacing? Unless you want it like that kinda rapid fire like blinking in a dream.

@ Glytch
Aha its all good To Love is to Suffer is very true ! and thank you so much for letting me know about my summary mess up i fixed it ! I hope you enjoy my short story if you want to read it, im about to start one of yours (:

See there I just goofed lol I made the second part of the comment to you when it was meant for another author. THe first part was tto you. omfg Im to hyper to think lol

No worries I did the exact same thing my for month here! You got this no worries. Check out my work if la like and let me know.

Also squee I LOVE YuYu Hakusho though I am all about Kurama and Kuwabara

@ Glytch
Thanks for letting me know! I`m new to this site I`m trying to fix everything !

The summary and chapter one are the same sugar. In case you didn't know