I'm really glad that I took the time to read this. I found your writing to be captivating, and I'm quite honestly really picky with writers. I love the way you describe certain things, I'm a very visual person so this really appealed to me.
I especially loved the line, "Only now, our broken pieces mingled and I now had no idea whose glass was decorating the floor."
I think you did a fantastic job and look forward to reading more of your writings in the future. :)
I found your writing to be captivating, and I'm quite honestly really
picky with writers. I love the way you describe certain things, I'm a very
visual person so this really appealed to me.
I especially loved the line, "Only now, our broken pieces mingled and I now had no idea whose glass was decorating the floor."
I think you did a fantastic job and look forward to reading more of your writings in the future. :)