Between Me and This Loss of Sleep Over You - Comments

I absolutely love this story. Update please!!

@ bobobo
It's funny that you commented on this because I was literally just looking at it a few days ago, and I really want to update but I just have to find the time. I'm hoping soon, though, so keep your eyes peeled because I haven't forgotten about this one!

I neeeedddd an update!!!

@ bedussey
AGH GIRL. I KNOW THIS ISN'T OKAY. I need to update this story but I only update stories when I get in certain moods and ughhh. You know how it is.

@ bobobo
Uh I'm sorry I never responded to this comment but it's literally one of the best comments I've ever gotten so tHANK YOU. I love smutty stories and I never think I'm good at it but then people say they like it so I just keep writing it

okay I FINALLY just finished this story after reading up until, like, chapter 3 and then accidentally closing out of the tab and forgetting to open it again until just now. all I have to say is GODDAMN. honestly this is the first time a smutty fic is making me feel SOME TYPE OF WAY, LET ME TELL YOU GURL...THIS ISN'T OKAY. I'LL STOP SHOUTING NOW

Also I just read this all in one sitting at work and I'm totally getting fired lol

Holy. Fuck. I am so fucking turned on right now. I'm like 30 some chapters deep into my own story and COMBINED it's not nearly half as hot as your 4 chapters. The smut is sooo fucking good but oh my god you do such a fucking amazing job of character development. You can tell everything just seems so natural and comfortable between the two. They're so obviously best of friends I cannot wait until you update again.

yay! more sexy times!! I don't care what happens as long as they keep getting naked together. because, oh god, fetus Patrick having sex is just...unf... I'm feeling light headed now.

hmmm, I'm not too sure where their relationship is going at this point but I'll tell you something it would be awesome just to see Patrick in a friends with benefits scenario

I think we're all gonna need a shower after reading this!

@ mswrite85
Yes, goddamn Mama Stump! Hahahaha I felt like I needed a shower after writing this *fans self*

@ Stumpslumps01
I think we ALL wish we were her, I mean DAMN. Ugh. I hope I can get more out soon :D

@ milesandmaisy
Ugh. Fetus Patrickkkkkk. My boyfriend always asks what I'm smirking about when I read fics, but what he doesn't know won't hurt him! ;D

no words...so effing hot. fetus Patrick can have me anytime.

my husband just asked me what I was smirking about...*giggle*

*takes a cold shower* oh how I wish I was her :) can't wait for the next chapter :)

Buahaha! Momma Stump ruined the sexy times. That sucks, dude. But indeed was this hot, hot, HOT. I had to open my refrigerator door to chill the fuck out. Can't wait for the next installment! :D

@ lady_enygma
I almost made that the title of the chapter, I swear to god! I was like "well I hope someone says something about it since it's not the title :/" and thank god you did! It makes me feel better about not making it the title, haha

It was indeed very hot, however I nearly literally laughed out loud at the ruined boner line lol

fetus Patrick makes me weak in the knees. they need to get naked, like now ;) <3 <3

@ ToxicMayson
Thanks! I'm really trying for his adorable, more innocent side! :D

@ lady_enygma
Ugh I'M addicted! Like I said, I'm going for his more innocent side, but still that horny Patrick we know exists ;D

@ Stumpslumps01
Hahaha I've read this a thousand times! I love young, horny Patrick too! I've never really written him before so this is new to me! Hopefully I can update soon!

@ mswrite85
Thank you! I felt like it was a little bit of a strange place to start the story, because immediately we see the strangeness of their relationship and the affection they show each other. But I thought the drunk Patrick scene was almost the perfect way for him to confess that he wanted more with her, (even though he was drunk haha) and that he wanted something with her even when his drunkenness passed. Idek. I just love Patrick so muchhhh

This was incredible! (even the multiple cock blocks...) Lovely flow and description of the tension between the two. Can't wait to read more!

I've read this 3 times already! I love young, horny, Patrick! Can't wait for an update :)