This story is wonderful so far. The plot and characters seem so quaint but something tells me they're about to get into grand and unordinary circumstances. I'm definitely looking forward to what you have planned for them. Plus, I love Basil's name and the fact that Kiko Mizuhara is her face claim, she's one of my favorite models <3____<3
This is really cute so far and at the same time it's refreshing and original - even though the chapters are relatively short, I'm already hooked. There's just the right amount of everything, it seems; the pacing is great and nothing drags on, and I'm definitely curious to read more and see what happens between them. This boy is mysterious but I'm hoping he's not hiding anything sinister. Anyways, keep up the awesome work!
I find it so wonderful and just amazing how you're able to just grab a persons attention, that person being me, with just one chapter.
To make it even more spectacular is that it was under 200 words. That's some serious skill to hold a persons interest with just a hundred something words.
I also like how she isn't overly beautiful. I mean, she is absolutely stunning. But in a simple refreshing way.
You've totally got my attention.
July 24th, 2014 at 11:22pm
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wow oh my gosh thank you so so much!! i'm thrilled that you already like them!!
@ sodapop curtis
thank you! you're very very correct about the "grand circumstances" thing. ;)
and gOD yes kiko is everything <333
@ gnarly.
thank you so much! it won't break ur heart too much i promise. c:
@ hawker!
thank you!! i'm really glad you like it