Broken - Comments

That was so sad . I'm hoping and praying that the sequel will have a happy ending. I need them to be ok in the end. I hate sadness.

Please post the sequel as soon as you possibly can. xxx

Ahh a part of me just broke reading the last chapter :(

This was really sad . I'm glad you're doing a sequel though. Please update again soon. xxx

i cried after reading the obituary! Love it! and love the Christmas chapter!

What a beautiful obituary!

That was heart-wrenchingly sad. I cried during this, as I said I would. It just reminded me of losing my Aunt and my Dad. I'm so sorry about your Granddad. It does get easier with time, but you never really get over it. I suppose you just come to terms in time. It does help to think of them being out of their suffering. Nothing is worse than someone you love, suffering. Take care. Hope you can update again soon. xxx

That was so lovely , but I know I'll cry when grandma passes away. She reminds me of my aunt. She died from cancer about 10 years ago. I miss her very much .

Please update again soon. Xxx

I'm so glad they caught the guy. I'm also glad Bella is healing. Please update again soon. Xxx

Poor Bella! I hope they catch the guy! I'm glad she has Brian and the rest of the guys to look after her. You really did good on this chapter. It was dramatic and sensitively written.

Please update again soon. Xxx

Oh no!! Poor Bella! Thank God she has such a wonderful support system.

Omg grandma had me laughing so hard! And how sweet is Brian?! Awesome chapter!

This chapter was just so romantic and the ending was just super cute. Btw, I love Grandma, she's just so funny and feisty.

Please update again soon. Xxx

Loved it!! They are super hot!

Loving all this sexiness . They're so in love .

Please update again soon. Xxx

@ AshleyDel28
Haha, wait til the end of this story! Don't worry, there WILL be a sequel :D

@ AshleyDel28
Haha, wait til the end of this story! Don't worry, there WILL be a sequel :D

Their relationship is HOTTTT! I just hope they make it through her graduating early and going to NY. I will be so upset if they break up.

Finally!!!! It was perfect.

They finally did it! Brian is such a gentleman. He was so considerate. Loved it xxx

Please update again soon. Xxx

I would be super pissed if he have me drugs. But I don't think he meant any disrespect by it. It was so cute how they dressed up together for homecoming week. I can't wait for the dance and them to finally have sex!!!!! I love that they've waited. It makes it so much sweeter.