Amazing!! I love it I love it I love it! Very cute! Very cute yet so hot! I will keep my eye on this one for the next update ;) love the way you write!
There was only one part I thought could have been different but honestly it's so minuscule it probably wouldn't make a difference. I really liked it :)
@ JamieAllOver. no seriously im sure lmao my brain is literally mush when it come to stuff like that so I probably need all the help I can get
@ brxndneweyes yes omg the song is so bad and iDK ABOUT THE WATERSPORTS ONE i only have a vague idea of what I want to do tbh and I'm still unsure about the sequel myself tbh I might just leave it bc I kinda like the ending too yay
fuckin' perf title omg (i listened to the song and sadly it's shit but hey good lyrics)
and i really liked this damnnn
DUDE ARE YOU WRITING A WATERSPORTS ONESHOT I'M GONNA FUCKING DIE HELP WHAT'S IT ABOUT
i sorta feel like a sequel would be cool but i also really like the way you left this like it was a really great ending that you didn't draw out at all and it was just really sweet