Flames in Our Veins - Comments

Update soon please! I love it!

Update soon please! I love it!

@arizonaskies thank you so much!

Wow, this is so great! I love your writing, and I'm interested in seeing what's going to happen between John and Ashley, and what they're going to discover while they're at Reagan's. Update soon please! (:

update please!! i miss this one

Oh man, I can feel my heart breaking for Ashley and John. It's really sad! I hope they can mend things. The chapter was really good though, and I can't wait for another update!

i just started reading this and i needed to say i really like this. something how you captured the mood and your words-- like the push pull between john/ashley/regan is making me really enjoy this story (i don't know if i made any sense) but i'm excited to see where you take this story.

wow I'm really diggin' this story

Oh boy, John what are you doing? Keep updating!

I really hope John punches Ryan in the face. But that's just me.

I'm pretty excited to see what happens at the party. I have a feeling Ashley likes John, and he kind of likes her, but he also likes Raegan. I could be wrong, but I bet we will find out!

Just read the first two chapters. I'm pretty excited to start reading this as the chapters get posted. You have a great writing style!