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  • m-attie

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    I've missed her so much, actually... John too. Can't wait for their meeting.
    Keep updating!
    August 31st, 2014 at 06:50pm
  • hiiamguesswho

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    update soon?
    August 26th, 2014 at 05:39pm
  • hiiamguesswho

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    update soon?
    August 26th, 2014 at 02:02pm
  • hiiamguesswho

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    update soon?
    August 25th, 2014 at 04:54pm
  • cherryc0la

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    off to a great start!
    August 16th, 2014 at 10:09pm
  • lovelyhope

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    You totally tricked me with the beginning. I knew there was no way Lou ignored her mom and was still with John, but still...I was hopeful. And what did you do? Lie and let me down. I TRUSTED YOU. haha Good start though and I can't wait for the rest of this!
    August 14th, 2014 at 03:42am
  • hiiamguesswho

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    I think the last time Lou saw Halvo was when they kissed because of the bucketlist I THINK????
    August 11th, 2014 at 04:52pm
  • m-attie

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    First of all? I love this layout! It's really great.

    And... Lou is back in town! I'm so so SO sxcited!

    Keep writing and update soon!
    Love you!
    August 10th, 2014 at 08:33pm
  • m-attie

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    First of all? I love this layout! It's really great.

    And... Lou is back in town! I'm so so SO sxcited!

    Keep writing and update soon!
    Love you!
    August 10th, 2014 at 08:33pm
  • brighten.

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    I saw this in my subscription list and I was like what the hell is this why does it seem like a continuation of some other story but then I remembered THIS IS THE SEQUEL TO ME, YOU AND THEN I STARTED FREAKING OUT.

    The first half I was so giddy.

    "But, I'd be missing a view." I SWEAR TO GOD.

    OK, so first things first: Great update. I am really excited to see how much has changed between Lou and John. Poor Liam. I loved his relationship with Lou; it was the sweetest thing ever. I remember their last conversation. But John and Lou... another accident? :( :( :( :( :(

    I'm glad her and Halvo kept in touch. This sequel is going to be amazing. I just know it.

    Update soon, darlin'!
    August 10th, 2014 at 10:00am
  • lisanoel

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    Still reeling from that last cliffhanger though...
    August 9th, 2014 at 07:20pm
  • lisanoel

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    Oh my godddddd. I am SO excited!
    August 9th, 2014 at 07:19pm
  • hiiamguesswho

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    YAY
    August 9th, 2014 at 05:07pm
  • EmptyInside

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    Please update sooon! <3
    August 9th, 2014 at 04:15pm
  • outsidethemoon

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    I haven't even read the first chapter yet but I feel like I'm going to throw up. I'm still reeling from that cliff hanger.
    August 9th, 2014 at 04:14pm
  • mmmxalright

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    I can't remember when she saw him. But! I am so happy you updated! I hope you do another update soon!
    August 9th, 2014 at 03:11pm
  • hiiamguesswho

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    holy shit i have to know what happens pls PLS
    August 3rd, 2014 at 02:08am
  • hiiamguesswho

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    holy shit i have to know what happens pls PLS
    August 3rd, 2014 at 02:07am
  • hiiamguesswho

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    Holy shit you gotta update this because fuck
    August 2nd, 2014 at 04:33pm
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