November 17th, 2014 at 08:14pm
Rainbow Pride - Comments
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All I can think is Thank God for your dad! What a horrible thing for you to hear from your mom. :'(November 17th, 2014 at 02:19pm
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October 18th, 2014 at 04:48am
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@ Not Your Mascot
Thank youOctober 12th, 2014 at 12:22pm -
Love this! I'll start from the beginning: You writing from experience is a very beautiful thing and it takes a lot of courage. The summary itself tells that if it's going to have a happy ending, there will be struggle getting there, and so my heart goes to you with this.
To be constructive: The layout could definitely use work. What you have now is a bit irritating to the eyes. But, your image is very nice and so is the summary. Since this is a story I'll also point out that there are missing periods after certain sentences and you should work on that.
Landon and Kaden are really great characters and I really enjoy how this all flows. Because it's so beautifully written, I'm finding myself at a loss for words other than anger towards all your experiences that have brought you to this piece. The last thing you want from a comment is a sympathy, I'm sure, but it's just so heartbreaking.
Definitely keep it up. Your writing, whether to vent or to share your story or to create something, is an amazing part of Mibba and I'm so glad this is what you chose for me to read. Absolutely beautiful.October 12th, 2014 at 06:32am -
lovely update. I'm happy to read Landon felt safe enough to venture out of his room and hang out with Kaden.October 4th, 2014 at 05:15am
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I just want to give Landon the biggest hug. Beautiful update.October 4th, 2014 at 04:11am
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@ Lex Luthor
Thank youOctober 3rd, 2014 at 11:20pm -
This is heart wrenching and I was not ready for it at all. That is not a bad thing though. I don't even know what to say, I know I said that you'd get up to 100 words but I'm just speechless.
We all know, to some extent, the struggle someone has when they come out, but after that it's not really talked about. It's just a question of if people accepted it or not, and if they didn't, to hell with them.
You write amazing. This story is amazing. The status has you apologizing, but I don't think that's needed. Don't apologize because people are stupid. There is nothing wrong with this, at all.October 3rd, 2014 at 07:44pm -
I know. But even so. It pained me to read it. I'm just... there are no words right now.September 25th, 2014 at 04:14pm
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@ Don'tFearTheReaper
It's just something that happens, nothing anyone can do about it really but thank youSeptember 25th, 2014 at 11:42am -
Oh jeez. I'm just. I think the best thing I can describe it as is that I'm floored. I can't say anything to represent how I'm feeling right now. Disgusted, maybe that would work. Not at you, or your writing. But that reaction... is totally uncalled for. I just... I can't even register what I just read. Ugh, I'm so frustrated (again, not with you). I literally can't give you a clear and concise comment. I do have to say that I'm sorry that this had happened. I'm just so, so, so sorry.September 25th, 2014 at 04:53am
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@ A. J.
Thanks for your support on this story it means a lotSeptember 25th, 2014 at 01:20am -
Your anger is totally justified. I don't want to see anything happen to you though and talking about your feelings, even writing a journal or posting here can help. As a person who has done the suicide attempt thing a few times, I can tell you that it gets better. Not much, but better than it was. (for me)
As for your mom, it may take time, it may not ever change. I wouldn't worry about it. An easy thing to say when I'm not going through the exact same thing. She made her choice and you don't have to like it, but but now you know the real her. I truly hope your living situation changes and you find happiness.September 25th, 2014 at 01:03am -
@ A. J.
Thanks :)September 24th, 2014 at 11:45am -
Omg. I was reading and enjoying the pace of the story in this chapter and how you and your BF had this history... and then I read when you came home from his house and your mother uttered that sentence...that word. I felt my heart stop for a second and I had to remember to breathe. I know you and I have spoken about this in pm's, but when I read it just now, it snuck up on me and just... I can't explain it. What she said, I can't wrap my head around it. Yes, parents are supposed to love unconditionally, some don't, but for her to say that- like she had a switch and just turned off all her feelings and love for you. I'm so sorry this is your life and I hope it gets better in time. You have your loving boyfriend and a father who supports you. Keep that in mind. This chapter was incredibly sad. Hugs xxSeptember 24th, 2014 at 05:49am -
@ A. J.
Thanks xDSeptember 11th, 2014 at 03:09am -
Congrats on your story being featured!!!
Great chapter. I'm so happy Kaden opened up and now they're going to try to have a relationship. Like Landon, I feel something good finally has happened in his life.September 11th, 2014 at 01:40am -
@ A. J.
Me tooAugust 4th, 2014 at 09:11pm -
@ KillerPenguins
No problem. You can remain anon and tell your story. It's a sad one, but I hope it gets better in real life.August 4th, 2014 at 09:09pm
As time passes I'm getting used to it to be honest