Lost Inside - Comments

Aaaaaw. How adorable! He should take the guitar out and lay naked behind it with a bow down there and a giant card that says Merry Christmas!

Wow, I was convinced that Caleb was really drunk too. He's a good actor. lol. I absolutely loved this chapter!! Really excited to see what happens next!

Such a powerful update. Jetson's a dumbass.

Oh how I've missed this story! I didn't want to bother you about updating though. But oh my goodness Caleb's parents are annoying. Like how are they gonna do that to him and then suddenly feel bad about it? Sigh. Well, can't wait for more. I just love Declan and Caleb's relationship.

This is such a cute little tale you have going here. I'm stuck in suspense on what is happening next. I think it is Caleb. Please update when given the chance.

He probably wasn't expecting Caleb to go downstairs, just a guess. The suspense though grr...

What wasn't he expecting? You can't just end it there! Great update as usual!! I am absolutely in love with this story, but I think you know that already. c:

Oh gosh I love this story. Caleb is adorable, I want to read more!

Oh geeze. I really dislike Caleb's parents, like even more so than I already did. Also, I like how you are giving Caleb a story with his parents. I think it would be really east just to cut Clarissa out and have Delcan and Caleb live happily ever after and blah blah blah. But I think it shows your story telling that you choose to talk about Caleb's back story as well. Wonderful update!!

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Awwh poor Caleb. But oh my goodness, one of his sisters actually cares about him! Can't wait to see how that turns out! love you more. ^^

More! Must have more!

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Thank goodness Declan's father wasn't that bad. And I'm so happy Caleb found some confidence to tell not only Declan but Declan's parents about his past. Can't wait for more! (:

I'm super stoked that Clarissa is out of the picture (and I really hope she'll stay out, but I don't think that would make for a very interesting story...). And Caleb and Delcan are the cutest people on the face of the earth. Millie's cool as heck, too. I really love the characters in this, they're so well-written and wonderful. I'm so in love with this!

B x

Another amazing chapter i feel like his father should be a little supportive not totally okay with it but wanting his son to pick a woman within what they think is fit. Lol i dont know,that would take the intensity off so nvm hahaha anyway loved it

Oh my goodness this is just what I've been waiting for! I'm so glad he finally called it off with Clarissa! And I loved the part when his mother came and Emilia and Caleb hid. haha I was kinda holding my breath the whole time. Caleb's hiding place though! I've done that before except it wasn't the top shelf it was a lower one. :p And oh my goodness I love Emilia! Kinda nervous about what will happen when Declan's mother brings his father over. I kinda feel like he's not quite like Declan's mom though. We'll see. c: Great work as always! <3

I loved this long chapter i know its hard to get this kind of flow for chapters and i feel that it was amazing and just perfect. dont doubt length.

I really loved this chapter!! And ugh I just want to punch Clarissa and I was really hoping that Declan would even though I know he wouldn't do that or else he would've already done it. I'm so in love with this story. c:

Aw, Caleb. :c Have I ever mentioned how much I dislike Clarissa? Cause I kinda hate her. And Declan's parents, especially his mom. I really liked this chapter though. I just wanna hug Caleb though.

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