Woah i literally never read het ever and i read all of this and i really liked it :) i really liked the dynamic between them and it was really hot :P (then again you're like my favorite author so of course it was a good one shot XD)
First off, I just want to say this story is amazing OMFG. sorry, I just had to say that. Now that I am okay... let's get down to business!: I loved how she didn't know how to give a blow job because I never see that in stories. Usually when I read stories where it's the guy or girl's first time giving a blow job, they instantly know how to give it (which annoys me to the point where I just want to scream). Thankfully, your's was the first one I've ever read with her not knowing how to.
“I... sorry, it's just... you're not gonna fall in love with me after this or something, right? I mean, that always happens in the stories I've read, an—”
“You read stories where the girl gives the dude a blow job and then he ends up falling in love with her, yet you don't know how to give one?” he said, cutting her off. oh my Satan, these two lines made me giggle. I found this incredibly cute for some odd reason.
I found no mistakes, and I honestly loved this so much.
@ alltimetrotta i'm not sure what to do with that info but um ty bae<3 i'm glad you liked it but pls don't get sick it wasn't good enough to throw up over
Whenever I get super super turned on I feel like throwing up (gross I know ) and let me just tell you I feel like throwing up really bad. This was amazing.